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Review of chapter "UFC: The Wrong Path" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
I like it!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [14 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "UFC: The Wrong Path" from raxadian
Review:
Well, this version of KaL could be a Noble Demon, as he is a villain but in some circumstances he acts heroic.
Comments from author:
I would still have him have a noble core deep down.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [13 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "UFC: The Wrong Destination" from raxadian
Review:
The problem with "Superman/girl/woman" in the Marvel universe stories, is that they make the Kyptonian too Overpowered...
Comments from author:
It's always the risk for writing Superman in any story really. DC currently have him literally able to lift the equivalent weight of the Earth. I never go for him being that powerful. Lifting a mountain is sort of the range i keep in my head. That's sort of the level Marvel write Thor and the Hulk so it fits to have Supes roughly at their level in strength terms. Course Supes has all his other powers on top of that.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [13 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "UFC: The Wrong Destination" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
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I like this idea - Superman Returns has some interesting points for crossovers etc. and a big enough time hole that all sorts of things can fit in.
Comments from author:
You can basically use the idea that any number of things might have happened that allow you to crash Supes down on any Earth you want so it is perfect for crossovers.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [9 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hidden Self" from raxadian
Review:
This chapter was brilliant.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory-ous New Universe" from raxadian
Review:
What will the Ancients think about all this?
Comments from author:
Probably nothing good. Thanks for the review.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death Can Be A Kindness" from raxadian
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Now, the mistake in this is that Buffy could just steal parts of someone else soul to be whole again, and she didn't. Even if how doing so was blocked from her memory, as ruler of limbo she has access to the know how.
Comments from author:
Or maybe she has just lost herself to the darkness and doesn't care. Either way in the end this is the way i wanted to end the chapter. Thanks for the review.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [24 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory-ous New Universe" from BlueEyedJedi
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Is there any chance of Kal and Glory delivering a smack down on the Ori. The Ori would just as/if not more annoying than the Goauld?
Comments from author:
Anything is possible. Thanks for the review.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [23 Jul 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hidden Self" from CrystalBlaze
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If this is after The Sound of Drums and the Master's final end, she can't even face the Doctor.

That's a whole new level of Hell she dug for herself.
Comments from author:
Ah well i never bothered considering exactly when she is in relation to the Doctor but since the whole premise of the show revolves around time travel she could be at any point after the end of the Time War.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hidden Self" from eriktheviking
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A great play on Dr Who canon events to give Natasha a history.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hidden Self" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Interesting idea.

small typo (I think so anyway)

“I told her not to open the locket and wake me up. This is not what I wanted,” 'Natasha' states.

Should the "her" be "him"?

later - OK, I half thought that might be it, thanks for clarifying.
Comments from author:
No. This is Romana commenting that Natasha shouldn't have opened the locket so it is correct.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death Can Be A Kindness" from mendal
Review:
There's a difference between dark and evil, this chapter is evil not dark.



EDIT:One thing I think that virtually everyone would agree is evil is torturing for pleasure.
Comments from author:
True about there being a difference but where you draw the line on what is dark and what is evil i think differs from person to person. It was the idea i had and this collection was all about going to different places than i normally write my stories.

Thanks for taking the time to write a review.
Review By [mendal] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hidden Self" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
An interesting little idea... I wonder how she ended up in the Marvel Universe?
Comments from author:
Well if i ever write a sequel my idea would be this is the parallel world of the Cybermen from Age of Steel and Romana got sucked through when the Dalek Void ship punched a hole in between the worlds. Needs more detail to explain that i know but it would allow her a way back and to see the Doctor again this way. Alternatively she simply got flung through to this world when the Doctor pushed Gallifrey out of the universe as we now learned he did during the Day of the Doctor to save it. I'm sure there are other possibilities but there's 2 main ones.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wedded Bliss...Interrupted" from hpssslashfan
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ROTFLMAO!!! I really hope you continue this little snippet. Clark and two baby slayerette's, 1 boy (Buffy's) and 1 girl (Faith's) and the Scooby's. Clark would try to dress his 3 year old daughter in "Lana" pink and she'd be like, "but Daddy...Mommy's go' b'ack leddur pants, why can't I have b'ack leddur paaaaants, toooooooo!" And Xander would teach them the puppy eyes of doom! *Snort*
Comments from author:
Must admit never thought of Clark and his two future baby slayerette's. It would be funny. I'll give it some thought.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [hpssslashfan] • Date [16 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death Can Be A Kindness" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
You are a soul, you have a body. How hard is it for people to understand that?
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Not Rated
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