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Review of chapter "Glory-ous New Universe" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Is there any chance of Kal and Glory delivering a smack down on the Ori. The Ori would just as/if not more annoying than the Goauld?
Comments from author:
Anything is possible. Thanks for the review.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [23 Jul 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hidden Self" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
If this is after The Sound of Drums and the Master's final end, she can't even face the Doctor.

That's a whole new level of Hell she dug for herself.
Comments from author:
Ah well i never bothered considering exactly when she is in relation to the Doctor but since the whole premise of the show revolves around time travel she could be at any point after the end of the Time War.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hidden Self" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great play on Dr Who canon events to give Natasha a history.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hidden Self" from MarcusRowland
Review:
Interesting idea.

small typo (I think so anyway)

“I told her not to open the locket and wake me up. This is not what I wanted,” 'Natasha' states.

Should the "her" be "him"?

later - OK, I half thought that might be it, thanks for clarifying.
Comments from author:
No. This is Romana commenting that Natasha shouldn't have opened the locket so it is correct.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death Can Be A Kindness" from mendal
Review:
There's a difference between dark and evil, this chapter is evil not dark.



EDIT:One thing I think that virtually everyone would agree is evil is torturing for pleasure.
Comments from author:
True about there being a difference but where you draw the line on what is dark and what is evil i think differs from person to person. It was the idea i had and this collection was all about going to different places than i normally write my stories.

Thanks for taking the time to write a review.
Review By [mendal] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hidden Self" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
An interesting little idea... I wonder how she ended up in the Marvel Universe?
Comments from author:
Well if i ever write a sequel my idea would be this is the parallel world of the Cybermen from Age of Steel and Romana got sucked through when the Dalek Void ship punched a hole in between the worlds. Needs more detail to explain that i know but it would allow her a way back and to see the Doctor again this way. Alternatively she simply got flung through to this world when the Doctor pushed Gallifrey out of the universe as we now learned he did during the Day of the Doctor to save it. I'm sure there are other possibilities but there's 2 main ones.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wedded Bliss...Interrupted" from hpssslashfan
Review:
ROTFLMAO!!! I really hope you continue this little snippet. Clark and two baby slayerette's, 1 boy (Buffy's) and 1 girl (Faith's) and the Scooby's. Clark would try to dress his 3 year old daughter in "Lana" pink and she'd be like, "but Daddy...Mommy's go' b'ack leddur pants, why can't I have b'ack leddur paaaaants, toooooooo!" And Xander would teach them the puppy eyes of doom! *Snort*
Comments from author:
Must admit never thought of Clark and his two future baby slayerette's. It would be funny. I'll give it some thought.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [hpssslashfan] • Date [16 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death Can Be A Kindness" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
You are a soul, you have a body. How hard is it for people to understand that?
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "After-effects" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL! Loved it!
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you did.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death Can Be A Kindness" from Valandar
Review:
Aaaaaand I disagree with this interpretation of Illyana. For one, there are countless examples outside the X-comics that contradict it, and even within the X-Comics her own thought bubbles contradict it. Well, not completely, but her darkness definitely is not to the extent shown here. Therefore, I don't see this happening to Buffy. Ah, Alternate Character Interpretation, I guess.
Comments from author:
I did make clear in my note i was exaggerating it. I know she's not that bad but she's definitely not good either. She'd lied, deceived and manipulated everyone when it suits her, even her own brother whom she left to suffer as the Juggernaut when she could have broken the curse any time she wanted because she wanted him to experience what she has.

My guiding idea was that i wanted a dark ending so i guess there was always going to be a few people who didn't agree with it. It's fine. It never bothers me. People can like or dislike my stories. You are free to.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Valandar] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death Can Be A Kindness" from cmdruhura
Review:
Interesting take on Buffy as Illyana. I don't think I will go quite that dark with my story "Come As You Aren't". Of course in mine it isn't just Illyana that is walking around during Halloween.
Comments from author:
Well i was in a mood for darkness so i wrote dark. The overriding image i had in my head was the ending, Buffy transformed into the demon version of Illyana, ruling over Limbo. Everything else was how i got there.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death Can Be A Kindness" from texaswookie
Review:
very intriguing wouldn't say no to more of this
Comments from author:
Well i do try to add stories to this whenever i can think of them. If you mean this particular story where i leave Buffy twisted into the Darkchylde i invite anyone who wishes it to write something if they have an idea based on it. Thanks for the review.
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [8 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "After-effects" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Hehehehe. Can't stop giggling. Not a big comic geek, so the Powergirl/Superman deal doesn't squick me like maybe it should. The last bit about Willow's sexuality was a riot!
Comments from author:
It really wouldn't be a big fix to make PG not Clark's cousin. She's from a parallel universe after all. Yeah i thought the bit with Willow was funny too and it wasn't bad for something i wrote in about 20 minutes late one night.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "After-effects" from cmdruhura
Review:
You forgot to give Cordelia's take on Buffy's new physique. Since Charisma was being considered for the role of Wonder Woman, a not under endowed heroine herself, I'm sure Queen C would have some opinion.
Comments from author:
I'm sure Queen C would but i wanted to keep it down to Buffy's close inner circle.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory-ous New Beginnings" from JasonBarnett
Review:
if Glory's so all powerful now and planning to take over the world why not put Willow and Tara's minds back together in a way she likes?

edit: maybe nanny for the kids? tormenting Dawn? Let her think that human minds can fix themselves eventually and then psych, no Glory just put them back as more useful slaves. Better looking slave than Jinx, Gurk and the rest?
Comments from author:
Why would Glory care to? Glory has little interest in them unless she has a plan to use them in some way which she doesn't. She probably finds it more amusing to leave them crazy.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [5 Jul 11] • Not Rated
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