Loved this story. I was very curious how it would turn out with being a cross with star trek. I was surprised and found it all intriguing. Definitely one of my favorites and being added to my recs. I'm glad I stumbled upon it.
Review By [zxusof] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I found this story extremely Mary-Sue-ish and in need of a good proofreading. I didn't feel at all that there was any true danger for Our Heroes, and everything came too easily to them.
However... I really liked the alternate history of the Star Trek universe, the acknowledgment of the technological changes that started in the 60s with Roddenberry's extrapolation of the future, and the use of the Klingons.
I think this story had a lot of good ideas and a decent plot; I would love to see it rewritten with some of the issues I enumerated resolved. The ideas were enough to get me to rate it a 6... but with some changes and editing it would be great, instead of merely interesting.
Comments from author:
you need to look up the definition of Mary Sue. Come easily? Perhaps? But more of a case of Buffy and company having good help for once. You think Joss's vision made much sense?
Buffy showed she had a lot more intelligence then Joss allowed; have to laugh at how he catered to the Gays on Willow yet he had his so called Heroine act so stupid so often.
I write to please myself as all writers do.
Review By [Listener] • Date [6 Apr 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Final Changes" from DavidFraser
Review:
Enjoyed it, but some indication of a change between scenes (even if only a * or #) would have made it even more readable.
(The rather abrupt change made for a pause while the reader goes 'huh' and goes back to figure out what just happened - sorry).
Review By [DavidFraser] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
This story is one of the better I have read. I couldn't stop reading it, even during work. Me reading one story for ten hours straight is unusual, and I tip my hat to you. I couldn't bear to just leave it alone. Thank you for such an enjoyable read.
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [2 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review By [vladt] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Final Changes" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Who'd have thought that W&H might ever be in a position to be somewhat helpful (for a small fee) in the Slayer's efforts to make the world a safer place?
Loving these twists and turns and new ways of looking at aspects of BtVS and AtS canon.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [2 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Even though they could only find 100 Potentials, there are (in canon) over 2000 actual Potentials in existence that the Council didn't know about. More actually, since all of those killed by Bringers in Season 7 are still alive, although I suppose they might be among the ones that were found (since an actual number the Bringers killed was never revealed). The Bringers probably only went after those most likely to be Called and hence known to the Council. That still leaves the other 2000 or so who have now been Called because that spell was *not* just limited to those 100.
I was waiting for you to spring that surprise on the Scoobies but you didn't.
Comments from author:
You did notice I said AU, right?
Review By [theunixer] • Date [2 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Is there going to be much more, how will it continue, WR&H have come into the fold, 100 Slayers have been called whats going to be the next focus. How will the Slayers adn Klingons be entertained. Attacking other demon demensions maybe? will Slayers go to repay the Klingons aid by helping their civil war?
This has been an awesome story. Is this the end of it, or will there be a sequel? Right now I'm guessing this is the end, because really, where would they go from here? Unless they travel to other dimensions or something, but what would be the point?
Comments from author:
Probably the end
Review By [CageFire] • Date [2 Jun 11] • Not Rated