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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShyBob
Review:
Totally in character for Dawn, winning money off a sure thing (from her point of view). Neat spin on some positive stuff to come out of the Collapse. For a minute I was worried the First Evil was involved...
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [7 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Letomo
Review:
While it's a great little one-shot, a short covering Kara's response to it, and maybe Clark and Bruce's, would be really interesting to read.

Still, I enjoyed it, and it's fitting that Amanda's Spirit Animal was Supergirl.
Comments from author:
There's a little hint in the most recent story - Kara has seen vampires, what (if anything) she's doing about them I'll leave to your imagination for now.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
And so we remember the ones we lost...nice to see the supernatural angle enter this series. Well written as usual, thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
I really liked Amanda, it's odd she doesn't make it into more stories. I'm not going to promise that there will be more supernatural stories in this sequence, I think a little goes a long way.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [3 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
great addition to the tale. thank you for the very good read.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [20 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamDragon
Review:
Has a nice potential for a continueing story.
Comments from author:
Maybe - not sure I want Kara fighting vampires though, too destabilising.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [19 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Nicely done. Can definitely see Dawn making a bet like that. Never take a tip from a time traveler lightly...

James aka Mr. D8a
Comments from author:
Well, there was always the risk that by doing that she'd split the timeline or something, but she got lucky.
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [19 May 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from philhe
Review:
Good story. I think it was good, though of course Dawn was struggling to explain how Amanda died without going into the whole Hellmouth thing. So naturally after all of that, she ends up telling it all anyway.

I definitely liked the profits from Amanda noticing and remembering the Apple logo from the phone like that. Very clever!

Looking for more of this series. I'd really like to see what Kara's reaction to the story was.

Phil
Comments from author:
I cheated slightly - as established in earlier stories, Kara's phone is something very special made by Waynetech, but probably inside an iPhone casing as its disguise.
Review By [philhe] • Date [18 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lunalurker
Review:
This was a cute and even touching little story, and a nice addition to a series that surprised me in how much I've enjoyed it. Thank you for writing. :)
Comments from author:
Many thanks - I hope to add more to the series.
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [18 May 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
Review:
Good work on the oneshot, I hope to read more from this series soon.

-Edit: Got any story ideas to dedicate to the end of the series "Smallville"?
Comments from author:
I have more ideas but probably won't be writing them immediately, I have other things to do.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [18 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
very good work
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PATM
Review:
Fantastic! Kudos and more to you.
Comments from author:
Many thanks!
Review By [PATM] • Date [17 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kizunakat
Review:
Great story. I love the originality of it and the great character portrayals. Keep up the wonderful writing. Kizuna
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [kizunakat] • Date [17 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Great story. Supergirl comes across as having quite the curious streak. I hope it doesn't get her into trouble in the supernatural world. It does seem a bit of a stretch that she wouldn't know already though. When you can hear or see everything in a large city it would be hard to miss all the vampires and other demons, but maybe that is just LA.
Comments from author:
That's the big problem, all right. Maybe she's just been taking it all for granted, without realising that most humans aren't aware of such things.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [17 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Wonderful!

I always mourned that Amanda -- who was so likable and interesting (more than the other Potentials, for me) -- wasn't one of those who made it out alive, but this story gives a funny, tragic, hopeful (in other words, very 'Buffyverse'-appropriate) twist to her death, allowing the successor to the Watcher's Council to fund scholarships and medical procedures, etc., through Amanda's visionary meeting with Supergirl in 2011.

Plus, it's a really neat addition to the world of "The Return".
Comments from author:
Thanks - that's how I hoped people would see it.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [17 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent, as always. I love the combination of humor, spookiness, and sadness in your story. For some reason, possibly because she was well written and acted, I remember Amanda when most of the SiTs were just cyphers. Nice to see she remembered the iphone. Lol! To misquote Dawn, I think your story would have amused her. Lol!
Comments from author:
Amanda was great - it's a shame they killed her.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [17 May 11] • Not Rated
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