Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dogbertcarroll
Why do I see Dawn using her diminutive alter ego to sneak into Xander's bathroom and spy on him?
Review By [dogbertcarroll
] • Date [20 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lwbush
Well, that was WAY too early for Wilkins to be Olvikan...
Review By [lwbush
] • Date [25 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Sweet! TinkerDawn should have a lot of fun being a part-time fairy. Not to mention how cool it is that the rest of the Scooby Gang is now able to fly with her pixie-dust and happy thoughts. Well, maybe not Buffy the Grumpy Slayer. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip
] • Date [23 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
I have no clue who Dawn or anyone esle went as.
-Edit: What aboput doing one with modern disney characters?
Comments from author:
Dawn went as Tinkerbell from the Disney 1953 Peter Pan movie, and various appearances later on. The rest of the Scoobies (Buffy, Xander, Willow) went in their usual costumes -- noblewoman, soldier, ghost -- but because the Key ended the Chaos spell right after that was cast by Ethan, none of the older teenagers or even anyone else were changed into their costumes. Dawn, on the other hand, kept the ability to change into a tiny magical fairy and back into a normal human. The younger Summers sister while in her new form can also fly and scatter pixie dust onto her friends, allowing them to join the small magical creature wearing a tight green dress in flight.
Review By [JediKnight
] • Date [22 May 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ponder
Original review date: 2011-05-22.
I think you made Dawn closer in age to Buffy? In canon she was six years younger than Buffy, too young to be in junior high as of season 2. Private review for now; will make it public after you respond.
The other review was private too so I didn't see it. (this one is now public as promised)
Heh, No way would I ever spot an AU alteration of facts about Britney Spears. :)
Yeah, if you envisioned Dawn as 13 in this story, that's definitely an earlier birthdate than in canon. Dawn's canon age in season five was 14. I don't remember if her age was exactly stated anytime in season five, but in season six, who can forget the OMWF line: "What I mean/I'm fifteen/So this queen thing's illegal!"
Comments from author:
Hmmm.... That might or might not be AU, since I had Dawn in mind as a thirteen-year-old in this story. But, as already mentioned to another reviewer, what I specifically wrote as AU was Britney Spears and her video. In the real world, 'Baby One More Time' came out in October 1998, a year after the Halloween episode. As I remember, copies of that costume turned up in the Halloween stores just a few days afterwards.
Review By [Ponder
] • Date [22 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mpop
Loved the surprise crossover.
And I'm amazed that you came up with the idea of Spike suffering nicotine detox.
Review By [mpop
] • Date [22 May 11] • Not Rated