Review of chapter "Chapter One" from severuswinchester
Very interesting tale of death and rebirth, with a bit of a dystopian ending. I liked how you described the hearts regrowing. I also liked this description: "...silver-haired scythe-wielding shinobi..." - just rolls off the tongue in a rather delightful fashion.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it!
Review By [severuswinchester
] • Date [17 Jul 13] • Not Rated