Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
POTENTIALlyAwesomeReview:
oh my! :)
Comments from author:
Lol, I know, right?
Review By [
POTENTIALlyAwesome] • Date [5 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
GenukaReview:
YUMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 *drool*
Comments from author:
Wow! Didn't expect that strong of a response. Thanks!
Review By [
Genuka] • Date [26 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
CPTSkipReview:
Oooo! Kinky! But you made me laugh so nice job. The only thing wrong was your little story was it was too short. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I might lengthen it later on, but only when the muse hits me.
Review By [
CPTSkip] • Date [24 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
GlongiReview:
Not bad... but too short. Can't tell if the characters are right or the story believable, for it would need more to really be...
For now, it is S & M ... Short, and that is Mean! :)
Comments from author:
God, I had a hard enough time writing what I did! It took me a full twenty minutes to write that. Kink is not something I am at all familiar with, let me tell you. . .
But thank you for your review! I'm glad you liked it!
Maybe if the muses give me further inspiration, I'll add more to it.
Review By [
Glongi] • Date [24 May 11] • Not Rated
