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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from divaslayer
Review:
Interesting concept, I can't wait to see where you take this.

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [25 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
good start. some more please
Review By [bradsan] • Date [28 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Very nice, some backstory for the neophytes may be in order, and I mean on both sides. Slip it in as the filling in both Buffy and the Marvels will give each other.

Just one thing. His name's Reed. Unless this is just slightly AU, that is..
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [28 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Review:
cool. This is a keeper. More please!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [26 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Cool idea. You might want to expand the storytelling a little though (or a lot:) This bare bones summary leaves us with a lot of questions. Where was the warping - in Reid's lab, in Strange's Tower, in the Avenger's mansion? Was Buffy unconcious when she arrived, is she still unconcious? You say she was healed after a few days but it sounds like they just left her in a heap on the floor. Did they take her to a hospital or give her some kind of first aid? Did they giver her any clothes, or try to find out where she came from? Don't be afraid to use a few more workds to describe what is going on, and take your time.

ps. Did you mean AKA Mr Fantastic? not BKA.
Comments from author:
BKA means better known as.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [25 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)ridert
Review:
nice idea, to bad that the author 'becuzitswrong' already used it in their story "Buffy's Hammer".
Comments from author:
I was inspired by that story.
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [25 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamDragon
Review:
Nice premise.Try making paragraphs longer than one sentence and add more information.Has potential.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [25 May 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JoeDineen
Review:
That is not a story, it is at most a set of ideas that could make up a story.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [25 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ElldenStorm
Review:
Interesting idea! And it could be lots of fun. But you're really going to have to give us more to get any further real feedback, and I wouldn't post anythin less than 4000 words. Posting 500~ word chapters will only serve to tick people off...
Review By [ElldenStorm] • Date [25 May 11] • Not Rated
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