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Review of chapter "Jamaica Blues Now for real" from Meneldur
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I am dead tired. But I have returned. I have not the energy to review, because I must sleep, but I've finally caught up with all I missed during my Officer's Training. There's not much I have to say - I do not think I can contain it all, and am too tired to put down my words, so they will likely escape me. I will only say that I am very glad you are continuing on with this, am sorry for your troubles, hope you feel better, and cannot wait for more of this, which hopefully I will be able to review.

PS. I absolutely loved Lillith's development and her finding her daughter. Also, what is going on with Faith, and Diana for that matter? And with Rowan's body? And for that matter, how has no one considered that Hazel might be alive, just as Rowan was? It seems Hazel is the most ill-treated of them all - I'd say she's practically the only soul marigold yet possess, I mean, they even lost Simon.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [12 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jamaica Blues Now for real" from SpacedCadet
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Oh good. Posting problems fixed.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [11 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jamaica Blues Now for real" from Cordyfan
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Great chapter, with a lot going on as usual.

Poor Kendra, but at least she's in a loving environment and she'll be an excellent hunting partner for Buffy, once her training has advanced a bit. They got away with their little trap this time, but if they get too reckless in that regard, Joyce might not be so forgiving next time and Kendra might be initiated into the family in another way...

Good to see the President explaining the supernatural 'facts of life' to his underlings. He still might have to make an example of a few, who aren't getting the message.

Not usually a fan of Angel, but as far as Enyos is concerned, I can only say 'bon appetit'...

Nice to see Fred making an appearance - one of my favourite characters in Angel, who deserved better treatment from Joss.

Thanks for writing this.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jamaica Blues Now for real" from wonderbee
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Neat section, and will wonder what all will go down next time as Kendra gets used to her new abilities,and what will go down next time as the gang gets building to the next wave.
Review By [wonderbee] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jamaica Blues Now for real" from Ishi
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I hope you feel better soon!! Concussions suck.

Love seeing Buffy and Kendra working as a team it's certainly much safer for both of them! And I'm enjoying this portrayal of Travers as well. Also very happy to see Angel owning up for what he's done. Great chapter as always :-). It put a smile on my face to see the notification in my email inbox.
Review By [Ishi] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jamaica Blues Now for real" from (Current Donor)Truthmaker
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I'm not exactly sure making Kendra a slayer at this point would be canon divergent. All we know for certain from the televised episodes is that Kendra showed up in the second season and that she was called when Buffy "died". The general consensus is that the died part occurred when her heart stopped in the buried church but that is never explicitly stated by anyone who would actually know. For all we know Kendra spent 6 months in Jamaica as the Slayer before Zubuto sent her to Sunnydale with the prophecy.

I like how you are turning Buffy and Kendra into a pair, it's something I wish we had seen more of during the series.
Review By [(Current Donor)Truthmaker] • Date [9 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jamaica Blues Now for real" from musumenosuoh
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very cool chapter! very much looking forward to more!!!
Review By [musumenosuoh] • Date [9 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jamaica Blues Now for real" from FireWolfe
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Fantastic update. Dont worry about responding to th is review I understand life can be busy. Well done its a facinating story and the small changes are kind of cool. I was hoping there be a few boys added to the family so poor xander would not feel so overwhelmed lol. Anywat great update and I look forward to seeing more.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [9 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jamaica Blues Now for real" from starwolf
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thanks for the extra effort to get this posted. hope you feel better. this one just had lots of great little things going on, love seeing Buffy using her sword. keep up the great work, thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [9 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jamaica Blues Now for real" from AllenPitt
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That's very interesting (Angel's action). He had 3 choices -- cover it up and hope he didn't get caught; leave Sunnydale; or own up to it. I'm glad to see he took the 3rd and harder course. And he probably now knows what the soul curse trigger is, so that's good. And nobody liked Enyos anyway. Or something.
and now Fred is in town? Wondering if Gunn & his sister will turn up at some point.
And Marigold's victims are starting to be identified & returned. I expect a few at least will be very big surprises...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jamaica Blues Now for real" from Sunhawk
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Incredible chapter! Really liked the patrol details and how you are bringing in Fred! I still would like to see a few more Y chromosomes in the family though *grins* Poor Xander!

Very interesting scene with the FBI director and the President, really put things in perspective, bravo!

Hope you get better quickly, concussions suck!
Review By [Sunhawk] • Date [9 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jamaica Blues Now for real" from Misty
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Thank you for another fabtastic chapter x
Review By [Misty] • Date [9 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Jamaica Blues Now for real" from Sunhawk
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If it's due to the extension changing from html to htm might want to try manually editing the documents extension? Might just be something bizarro like that?
Review By [Sunhawk] • Date [9 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jamaica Blues Now for real" from HMaxMarius
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I assume this has something to do with how you handle formatting. What is your /normal way/ though? I've always manually added the html tags to my raw document before cutting and pasting the output into the story field.
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Like I've been doing it since I started posting, convert a Word file to a html file, upload it with the upload button. It worked until the most recent change when they went from html to htm.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [9 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jamaica Blues Now for real" from physcocadiliac
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The fact the site is messing you about stinks - please please please stick with it even if you have to split chapters! My life would be deeply saddened by a slower posting schedule as I barely survive the time between chapters as it is! Here's hoping it's a temporary issue on the site.
Review By [physcocadiliac] • Date [9 Mar 14] • Not Rated
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