Review of chapter "whole story" from
LunaReview:
cute.
Might want to edit:
Buffy stared at the guys smug smirk
to be: guy's smug smirk.
Comments from author:
Thank you! :-) I edited it.
Review By [
Luna] • Date [31 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "whole story" from
KnightOwlReview:
Very cute! I like the way Eric changes her mind.
Comments from author:
Me, too. :-))
Thanks, I'm glad you like it. :-)
Review By [
KnightOwl] • Date [29 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "whole story" from
ChloeBlackReview:
loved it!
Comments from author:
Thank you! :-)
Review By [
ChloeBlack] • Date [29 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]