Review of chapter "I Could Have Fallen in Love" from sciphy
Review:
a little confusing but Awww!!!!!!!! still so cute.
Comments from author:
It's the damn song I picked, I swear. I simply wasn't able to listen to the lyrics and stick to either present or past. *glares at song* Maybe I should have tried another song first . . . Oh, well, what's done is done.
PS: And no, I don't need any plot bunnies, thanks. *grins*
Review By [sciphy] • Date [22 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Could Have Fallen in Love" from Elleria
Review:
Is good.
Comments from author:
Thank you. And thanks for reviewing too.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [30 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Could Have Fallen in Love" from Kirallie
Review:
I like the idea and all but the jumping around was really hard to follow. Sorry.
Comments from author:
That's probably because of the lines I used. I set a goal for myself to use this song the way I heard it, so without switching around the lines to make it fit the story better. Which means that at times I was writing about Xander's thoughts of his past relationship and then switching back to the present.
Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [29 May 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Could Have Fallen in Love" from lothlorien
Review:
I love this line: Telling Slayers of any age not to do something was like him stripping: humiliating and never to be done again. Brilliant. But I have a bit of a problem with it - WHERE'S THE FLUFF??? And don't tell me that it's there at the end. That's implicit fluff. I don't need implicit fluff right now... I want a sequel. A fluffy fluffy sequel full of fluff. Explicit fluff. Falling into each others' arms and never letting go sort of fluff. Now get to it.
PS: Crye you cheated, I'm sure of it. Don't know how, but you did. So actually your review should be disqualified and I get first review. So there *sticks out tongue*
EDIT: But Crye gets sequels all the time. *pout* Why don't I get a sequel?
Comments from author:
See, this is why I like trying out new things to write: to frustrate readers. *cheeky grin* I like the implied fluff and you're not getting a sequel. ^_^
Thanks for reviewing, though.
PS: That's my favourite line too. Stripper!Xander for the win!
EDIT: When have I ever given Crye a sequel? Try as I might, I can't think of anything.
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [29 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Could Have Fallen in Love" from cryefourme
Review:
Cute sweet, AWW Xander know about McFly. lol Love it. First review. sticks tongue out at L
Comments from author:
I can't imagine many teenage girls living in England wouldn't like McFLY. They're huge there.
Poor Xander, though . . . *cheeky grin*
Review By [cryefourme] • Date [29 May 11] • Not Rated
