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Review of chapter "Two Addresses." from Mcspender
Review:
Joyce is the hag???. This is gonna get messy xD!!.
Comments from author:
Nope, this is early Season 6. Joyce has sadly been passed away a while now.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Two Addresses." from Jerri
Review:
Okay, well done, very true to Sir Terry's work. I laughed my butt off. Good job.
Comments from author:
Thank you! That's what I was aiming for.
Review By [Jerri] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "6: The Path of the Hag." from Omegaprime
Review:
*snicker* they found Buffy's handiwork but I'm just wondering who is this "hag" they are looking for?

I just hope they don't say it to Buffy's face.

Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
I thought about explaining it, but it's funnier if the story does it, I think. So, you'll have to wait.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [10 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5: The first fight." from JoeDineen
Review:
Calling Buffy a cow was a good start, insulting her shoes would have been better.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [15 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5: The first fight." from eriktheviking
Review:
I forgot that annoying habit about the head removal not being fatal. Great fun, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5: The first fight." from Mcspender
Review:
Bad thing he didn't called Buffy Short or Tiny, his death could have been far gorier =P.
Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
I thought about describing it, but felt this was a better way to go. Leave it to your imagination.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [14 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5: The first fight." from Omegaprime
Review:
O_O, XO

Oooohh, there is one thing, ONE THING you must NOT say to a girl, armed or not, and that is to call her a cow.

Those poor Pyleans... NOT.

Keep up the good insanity.


Wait... the first Pylean is a SHE!!?
Comments from author:
Yep. I always intended it. Was very careful with pronouns. That's why I used her name so much. Plus, we know from the show that female pyleans are bigger and have beards, so it seemed a good and funny schtick.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [14 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4: The first night, pt. 2." from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
I almost feel sorry for them.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4: The first night, pt. 2." from eriktheviking
Review:
The Wee Free always willing to educate others. Great build-up.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4: The first night, pt. 2." from (Past Donor)wozwashi
Review:
ouch,

The Feegles lunch is served, extra green.
Review By [(Past Donor)wozwashi] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4: The first night, pt. 2." from Omegaprime
Review:
Methinks a certain Pyleaian will regret going to that area to get "cows." LOL

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [11 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4: The first night, pt. 2." from Mcspender
Review:
Evanarensathe, yeah, there's a lot of little ones around, and they all can kick your sorry butt, even worse, they can get a cheap lawyer and use him as a weapon =O!.
Cool chapter, see ya!.


ETA: No cheap lawyers,eh?. That means they're gonna... gasp =S, they're gonna use expensive ones ; )??.
Comments from author:
Oh, just to make it clear - this is a different tribe of Feegles from any of the canon ones in Sir Terry's books. So, no cheap lawyers.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [11 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3: The first night, pt. 1." from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL! I love those little guys!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [10 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3: The first night, pt. 1." from Ductile
Review:
You wrote a story about the Wee Free Men. I. FREAKIN. LOVE. YOU. Continue, please! Soon!
Review By [Ductile] • Date [9 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3: The first night, pt. 1." from eriktheviking
Review:
Great fun and totally believable of the characters involved.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [8 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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