Interesting story, but I'm wondering were the boys are (Xander, Andrew, Giles, Robin). So far it seems like only the slayers survived long enough to arrive in the SG-verse.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Sounds like magic has started up in the new universe... maybe that affects Dawn's status somehow? Not much else would get Willow worried about Buffy's reaction. So, assuming they can get back to Earth, New Earth... my guess is a new Hell mouth will be opening soon. Ouch.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Great new chapter, it's been a long time since you updated, I'm really interested in what'll happen next, and after all the explanations are done, what'll the destiny crew do next? How will they get home? Also, I'll have to go back and scan the last chapter to figure out what Willow is freaking about.
Comments from author:
That will be explained in the next chapter. But one could probably guess now.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Not Rated
hmm, that almost makes sense, more so than most star trek technobabble anyway. Well done. How long have the Destiny crew been asleep anyway? At least they can count on the medic to want to help people :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Ah yes, the abominable power known as Slayer wank and Willow Wank. Of course Willow created the universe, she's a lesbian, that alone means she is omnipotent and omniscient. I suppose that Buffy's punches are equal to the power of a supernova detonation and thus if she punches planets their wiped from existence. Dawn's snarks of course are reality manipulation at its finest.
If you can't understand what I wrote, its very simple. This fic, to me at least, sucks.
Comments from author:
As if the Hitchhiker reference wasn't enough to point out that the plot bunny that spawned this is totally crack. I don't know if I will continue on the crack course (generally magic-wank) or try to find a balance. I have ideas for both and I plainly don't know.
A Power-wank done in a serious manner is something this fiction will not become. Probably 'chosen against the child' (which I write in parallel) will, though. You can bitch there as well, once this happens (I would prefer if you pointed out the exact 'wank' you didn't like, there was nothing about omnipotence or omniscience here - character perceptions are a bit incomplete).
Review By [SCIfilover] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Not Rated