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In the shadow of the Beyonder

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BlueEyedJedi
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Happy New Year and god bless.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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interesting even if this fic reminds me strongly of another one I read ages ago. Dungeon Monk or something
like that, but I won't mind reading more
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5" from rankokunathree
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loved it cant way for more soon please!
keep up the awesome writing!
Brad
Review By [rankokunathree] • Date [5 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [14 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5" from Hanzo
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♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [14 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5" from CageFire
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Nice to see a new chapter. I do wonder how long you're going to be focusing on the diablo 2 dimension and such, and when you'll move on. I mean I own the game, and I played it for quite a while, but I'm not really wrapped up in the story line.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [14 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5" from Bobboky
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very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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Oz shouldn't have been at the party as Willow froze Patricia so he didn't need to take a bullet for her. Buffy should be a much better fighter at this point so she shouldn't have ended up following the canon tackle through window scene. Dru shouldn't be in any shape to do anything. We should be very far off canon at this point not following the same paths and just adding upgraded enemies so it all evens out.
Comments from author:
Well, you could take Dru not breaking her spine in the crash as a straying from the canon; despite Spike's demise, she was still healed like in the canon. When the gang charged in that church, the ritual was already underway, and Spike was dusted after stopping it and trying to run away.
As for Willow freezing Patricia, if memory serves, that attack was in public; i really don't see Willow making up her mind for such a visible use of magic before Buffy responds to the Terakan.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [8 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [15 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from DarthPayne
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Will we perhaps be seeing games like TES: Oblivion or Two Worlds II(or even Dragon Age) in this fic?
Comments from author:
Now there's a thought :D
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [14 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from Bobboky
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cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from Hanzo
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♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [14 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from LordSia
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You could use the excuse that by killing things in the pocket dimensions, the gang absorbs part of their aura - essentially becoming more and more otherworldly. This causes them to warp reality around them, slowly giving them access to better devices and allowing things to work longer outside of the Sanctuary.
Just an idea.
Comments from author:
Good idea, but even if i use it, it won't be that soon :D
Review By [LordSia] • Date [13 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from Bobboky
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good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from weirdbutgifted
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Interesting Redo. On the subject of power-ups... Depends on what threats you are going to have them face - the canon ones from BtVS shouldn't be an issue with the current rate of improvement. If they get X-genes etc, do you have opponents planned that will be a credible threat (either in BtVS style or SG/SW type)? If you do have them get powers, can I suggest it be as a result of either an exceptionally difficult fight or series of very difficult ones, and then have them take realistic amounts of time and trouble to learn them. So often it's: Person X affected by magic, gets Magneto/Phoenix/Xavier's power, learns to use it at the same level in a few weeks, despite the same level of competency taking the original owner years or decades to achieve.
On allies - you're talking about setting it in Sci-Fi verses, and none of your core group have any knowledge of advanced tech, so getting someone with a lot of scientific knowledge would be of great help; though they'd need to actually know and understand the fundamental principles, rather than just be experienced at modifying existing tech and vehicles with parts that don't exist in a universe that might require tech be adapted to conform with different physical laws. Another way you could overcome this issue is to have one of your evolutionary power-ups be something like Forge's ability or Syler's understanding, focused on tech.
Review By [weirdbutgifted] • Date [4 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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