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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jjordan
Review:
I agree with the others - this is fun. I also would like to see a Harry raised by Xander at Hogwarts, especially with the backup he'd have available! Please continue this series!
Comments from author:
Yeah, can you imagine Xander letting Harry just disappear to Hogwarts without seeing him often? Nah, me neither. I think Hogsmead is gonna get some new residents whenever Harry's in school. *snicker*
Review By [jjordan] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SpacedCadet
Review:
A fun series!

More please.
Comments from author:
I will try, really I will. Thanks for the review!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [28 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Allyssiandra
Review:
A very fun series, really wish there was more.
Comments from author:
I'm trying out scenarios to see what the muse will allow. It didn't like the boys Jesse and Jimmy getting kidnapped, stalled that story right out, so I'm trying something else.
Review By [Allyssiandra] • Date [5 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from randomguy
Review:
I just read the entire series up to this point and I really enjoyed it.

I like how you've set Jimmy/Harry up to have a supporting family and it will be interesting to see how that changes his interaction with the wizard world. Especially if Jesse/Dudley follow in Xanders footsteps as far as problem solving, "Don't worry Jimmy, I've dug up dad's plans for 'how to kill a giant snake' and gotten the C4 from stores......"

Can't wait to see where you take this.
Comments from author:
LOL Oh that's good! I could see my boys doing just that sort of thing. *snicker* When I get to that point, do you mind if I use a variation of this? *still giggling*
Review By [randomguy] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Letomo
Review:
I enjoyed this whole story sequence, and hope there is more to come!
Comments from author:
There will be, eventually. Real life is keeping me very busy, but I'll get back to it and my other 'Xander as a father' story as soon as I can.

Thank you very much for the review. :)

*edited because it was bugging me to have said that wrong*
Review By [Letomo] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Fayari
Review:
Next story!
Comments from author:
As soon as I can, yes. Thanks for the review. :)
Review By [Fayari] • Date [29 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vickzie
Review:
Brill stories.
Comments from author:
Um, that means good, right? *chuckle*
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kaleecat
Review:
just re-read the whole series. I love the tone, and how Xander has built this great family. The ties that are between everyone. In this part, clever Faith to suggest the end-run. Poor ol' Dumbledore, he just has no clue as to what he's up against. Over 100 years of getting his own way isn't going to much help against Xander's will & tendency to cause chaos, his Charmed relatives, a passel of Slayers and Ripper for a grandfather.
Comments from author:
*g* Why thank you! I appreciate your taking the time to read everything again and leaving a review.

I've actually been trying to write another little short story in this series, one where Jesse and James get (temporarily) kidnapped, but it's not cooperating. *disgusted sigh* I guess I'll scrap that idea and try another one for this series.
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Blackett
Review:
I love this series. It is so funny. Hope your muse will help you so we can have un update soonish
Comments from author:
Like I told another reviewer, I was trying, but it's not cooperating. I'll try a different storyline and see if that one will work for me. *g*

Thanks for reviewing! *vbg*
Review By [Blackett] • Date [30 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
I love this series so far and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment.
Comments from author:
I'm working on it, but it's resisting me. *rueful laugh*
Review By [twlight] • Date [23 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm trying to work on the next part, but it's not cooperating very well at the moment. I'll wrangle it into submission eventually though. *chuckle*
Review By [Elleria] • Date [16 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Comments from author:
*jaw dropping with surprise* How did you do the little hearts and musical notes?!? That's cute! Oh and thanks for the review, I'm working on it. :)
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
What a 'charming' series. Sorry about that. Lol! Love your Harris family and can't wait to see how Jimmy turns out. I am really enjoying your story and look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
*chuckle* I'm surprised nobody else has said that yet, actually. I'm glad you like the series and I'll try to keep making it cute and funny. Thanks for the review! *vbg*
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Whoooo! I love this series! Dumbledore just doesn't know what he's started messing with Xander Harris' kids. I'm looking forward to more stories in this series.
Comments from author:
*vbg* Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and as I just told Greywizard, this won't be the only surprise Dumbledore gets at the hands of one Xander Harris regarding his kids. *snicker*
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
Review:
Dutch, I'm always delighted to another story in this series, and this was yet another winner.

I would have loved to have seen the MOB's face when he learned that Xander had circumvented his actions and adopted Harry/Jimmy in the mundane world. ;-)

Looking forward to seeing how the old Fart tried to deal with this latest setback. ;-)
Comments from author:
*chuckle* Glad I could make you smile. This won't be the only surprise old Dumbles gets either. *vbg*
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [4 Jun 11] • Not Rated
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