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Review of chapter "...careless in her excitement..." from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
He wasn’t even supposed to be there.

*snicker*

A fan of Clerks?
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [15 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...careless in her excitement..." from Rune
Review:
Xander and Mrs. Malfoy?

Well I can see her being a wanton woman.

Purebloods have NO morals, else they would respect others... even "muggles".

Points for a more or less believable way of getting them together though.

And the rating is 8 because I took a point for the ickyness of the pairing and the adultery of the witch.

Otherwise good story. Thanks.
Review By [Rune] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...careless in her excitement..." from Morgomir
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Interesting start. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...careless in her excitement..." from Elleria
Review:
Interesting...going to read the sequel now.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...careless in her excitement..." from (Past Donor)Snag
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Add me to the list of folks that'd like to see this expanded upon. I'd much rather see the show of what happened, than watch Narcissa 'tell' about it.
Dialog > Exposition!
Review By [(Past Donor)Snag] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...careless in her excitement..." from deamon
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I would love to see this as an actual story. Maybe as introducing xander to the wizarding world and him and narcissa falling in love
Review By [deamon] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...careless in her excitement..." from Addlcove
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would be a great prologue for an AU story :) either covering her actions or the kid growing up and going to hogwarts
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...careless in her excitement..." from souldriven
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Like everyone else, please continue this marvelous plot-bunny. The possibilities and directions are quite limitless. Timeline wise I would put this around the end of the fourth or fifth book of Harry Potter, yes? That is around the turning point of the Harry Potter series (in more than one way) and Narcissa being pregnant- and not by Luciius- certainly shifts things... unless she keeps it quiet. I mean Draco's reaction alone to the news would be worth reading.
Comments from author:
*chuckles* It does have a lot of directions it could lead, doesn't it. I have been working on a series of ficlets that are still WIP's for this arc.

As for timeline: Buffy post S3, and HP post Bk5.

And you're right, Narcissa being pregnant can have a big impact on things.
Review By [souldriven] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...careless in her excitement..." from wdlwbt
Review:
I really liked this. I hope there will be more. Thanks for sharing :)
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I am considereing making this a series of ficlets, though.
Review By [wdlwbt] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...careless in her excitement..." from slmncpm
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give it to xander is what i say.
Comments from author:
Ack! Spying on my story notes! Bad! Bad!

*chuckles* Seriously, that is an option. Still, Narcissa has to take a lot into consideration; including her Death Eater husband, his insane master, and the future of House Black.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...careless in her excitement..." from VillageOrchid
Review:
Sounds like to be continued?
Comments from author:
I have some ideas for a series of ficlets, but they are still in production. Hopefully they will be ready to post soon.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...careless in her excitement..." from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written look inside an often overlooked character.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Narcissa was, unfortunately, much a filler character in the book series; a wife for Lucius and a mother for Draco. She didn't really become more until book six and by then she was a desperate woman in dire straights. I think there's more to her then was ever shown...

And Buffy canon shows that wicked dark women can't resist Xander. *grin*
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...careless in her excitement..." from BarefootXO
Review:
Please... please... Don't stop there.

This plotline has too much potential to leave hanging.

*puts on hopeful face*

Please?

Jasper
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much. I have some ideas for a series of ficlets, but they are still in production. Hopefully they will be ready to post soon.
Review By [BarefootXO] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...careless in her excitement..." from Raider
Review:
nice start.
Comments from author:
Thank you! *big smile*
Review By [Raider] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...careless in her excitement..." from Klyk
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I say what all the others already had said you just can't leave it like a cliffhanger like that.
Comments from author:
I have some ideas for a series of ficlets, but they are still in production. Hopefully they will be ready to post soon. As to the cliffy...I hadn't even thought of that.
Review By [Klyk] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Not Rated
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