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Review of chapter "...from the ashes to rise anew..." from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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For a moment I thought you were going to have her hide him under the identity of a faked pregnancy of Tonks, so he would be Teddy.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [15 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...from the ashes to rise anew..." from Rune
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Well at least someone has been hit by a clue by four. Tom has been insane for years, decades...

I hate JKR for the way she treated her characters, and Joss can be just as bad.

Thanks for continuing the series.
Review By [Rune] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...from the ashes to rise anew..." from Semet
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Awesome read! Is there anyway you could get this to eventually be a Xander/Narcissa pairing? Some way to maybe get the Dark Mark off of her, so on and so forth? Maybe? Pretty please?

Reply: Ah oh well. I have a thing for the occasional odd pairing, it makes things far more interesting in my opinion. But anyway, good work ^^!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it. *grin* However, this is Narcissa and Xander we're talking about. Happily ever after just doesn't apply. *shrug* Sorry...
Review By [Semet] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...from the ashes to rise anew..." from stonewar
Review:
this juicy. please continue.
Comments from author:
Thanks! ;) More is coming soon.
Review By [stonewar] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...from the ashes to rise anew..." from cloudleonsgurl
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Very interesting, very emotional. I like it. It is extremely well written and well done, I can't wait to see more.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it and that the emotional tone came through even though she wasn't panicking or throwing a hissy fit. More is coming soon.
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...from the ashes to rise anew..." from mithrilandtj
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Can LV even track her thru the Mark on the Hellmouth?
Comments from author:
Unknown. Narcissa believes it to be true though. And honestly, I don't think that Rowling ever mentioned his ability to curse his followers through it to have a range or limit. So...I don't know. She's just guessing.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...from the ashes to rise anew..." from ChiVayne
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I feel sad for Narcissa. I also imagine that having to raise and support a child is going to change things for Xander, a lot.
Comments from author:
I feel for Narcissa too. She's in an impossible position and her options are very limited. And yeah...Xander's life will definitely change once he's made aware of what's going on.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...from the ashes to rise anew..." from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it so far. More is coming soon.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...from the ashes to rise anew..." from (Current Donor)vidicon
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A very interesting sequel...I look forward greatly to reading the continuing sage of a child curesd by both Harris and Black blood...
Comments from author:
Yes...cursed. Cursed is a good word.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...from the ashes to rise anew..." from oldgirllost
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Thank you--I'm looking forward to more of this tale. So grim. So full of possibility.
Comments from author:
:) Glad you like it so far. And you're right - it is grim. Almost painfully so. I made myself feel so bad for Narcissa.
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...from the ashes to rise anew..." from Gonadius
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I like this... More than I think I would if it were a full-blown story, the subject sort of lends itself more to little glimpses than a complete lengthy tale.
Comments from author:
I think so too. There's too much time between ficlets that would end up a simple retelling of the show or books. So, little peeks in Cissy's head are enough for now.
Review By [Gonadius] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...from the ashes to rise anew..." from wdlwbt
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I really like this one too.


:D
Comments from author:
Thank you! :)
Review By [wdlwbt] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...from the ashes to rise anew..." from Darksnider
Review:
When did Narcissa get the Dark the Mark O_o she was never a death eater.
Comments from author:
To be honest, I thought she had one. I mean, I knew she wasn't an 'inner circle' member, but I thought she was a part of it all. However, I admit that I could very easily be wrong about that. If I am,...oops. Still, it works for the story arc so I'm keeping it.
Review By [Darksnider] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...from the ashes to rise anew..." from banner
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I love this piece - it's introspective without being dull, it has a wonderful sense of mood. She's clear, she's calm, she's *thinking*. You have conveyed her sense of grim determination, as well as her grief at the loss of all of her family. Great job.
Comments from author:
Thank you. That's exactly what I was going for. The Scoobies tend to react with an application of force to all situations. Very Gryffindor of them, but Narcissa is a Slytherin to her bones. Her reaction to a situation is to plot and plan.
Review By [banner] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...from the ashes to rise anew..." from Martin
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This is a nice beginning of a chapter, but it is only 1 quarter done. I don't know how you can say 'complete'.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it, however it was never meant to be a full story. It's more in the nature of a series of connected ficlets.
Review By [Martin] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Not Rated
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