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Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: Family Ties" from RougeReaper
Review:
This story has been great I love the plot and the way you write cant wait for the next chapter
Review By [RougeReaper] • Date [24 Aug 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight: Family Ties" from Jesoliamahn
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Can't wait to read more! Love the story so far!
Review By [Jesoliamahn] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven: In the Beginning" from clockworkorange
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Joyce knew John and Mary way back when? Interesting.

Hunter!Joyce is interesting. Joyce/Merrick as well. (I'm curious about why Joyce ended up with Hank instead of Merrick now. Did Buffy telling Merrick that she was Joyce and another man's daughter end up ruining that relationship or something? And why DID Joyce end up putting Buffy in a mental institution when she told her about vampires if she already knew about the existence of the supernatural?)
Comments from author:
To be perfectly honest, I just threw Joyce and Merrick in there to give Buffy more of a part in that episode. I'm not really planning on exploring that angle any more.
Nevertheless, glad you're enjoying it :)
Review By [clockworkorange] • Date [22 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six: Are You There, God?" from clockworkorange
Review:
At least they got a heads up about The Rising of the Witnesses. But still, ouch. Angst-y. Especially Buffy having Spike as one of her Witnesses.
Review By [clockworkorange] • Date [17 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude Two: Be Still and Know" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
love it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [22 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude Two: Be Still and Know" from Vickzie
Review:
Poor Dean and Sam in a way! Hope you update more soon
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [12 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude Two: Be Still and Know" from Gideon
Review:
Nice flashbacks. Now all they need to do is keep Sam in the box.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude Two: Be Still and Know" from nicjphill
Review:
Glad to see how Buffy got involved but really curious what the angels think she is going do to help destiny along. Glad that they are helping Sam now instead of later. Would like to see what is happening to Giles and the other slayers. Loved it and looking forward to more!
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude Two: Be Still and Know" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
Nice update!
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Personal Demons" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
awesome! What does buffy know? I can't wait for more.
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [4 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Personal Demons" from nicjphill
Review:
Loved it but I think there is more to what happened in hell. It seems that Cas and the angels may be on their side but not sure I trust that. Glad to see Buffy and Dean getting along. Looking forward to more!
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five: Personal Demons" from (Past Donor)exiled
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I normally don't read Supernatural crosses because I don't like Dean. That said, I really like this story. I like how broken you have made Buffy and I like how human you have made Dean. Plus, you have great, believable plot.

Thank you for sharing your vision and hard work!
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Revelations" from Kaleidofox
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Oooooh, I cannot wait for the next chapters!!!

I really am interested in finding out your spin on why she went to hell instead of heaven, and the impact that had on the rest of the plot after that. And of course, what is going to go down with the Supernatural crew as well!


Hope you find time to update soon!
Review By [Kaleidofox] • Date [22 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Revelations" from Gideon
Review:
Great writing! I'm surprised to see you have both the PTB and the Angels in your story but that just makes it interesting I guess :) I'm sad for Buffy that she went to Hell and apparently Willow didn't or couldn't get her out again. Does that mean that Willow didn't go bad and there are not 100s of Slayers now? I gotta say that the PTB they met with probably provided more useful info in a couple of sentences than in the whole rest of Buffy's life! Things must be serious.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [30 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Revelations" from celticjenn
Review:
Just found this story and I am loving it so far! I really hope that you will continue this, its well written and I love the twist that youre putting on the whole seals, Dean, Sam, Buffy thing..So please update soon!
Review By [celticjenn] • Date [30 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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