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Review of chapter "Cosmic Cousins" from RedCalypso
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I tried to read this story, it seemed like it could be interesting, but I was squicked out of the story when Fox referred to Willow as "Low". Will, yes. Low, uh, just no.
Review By [RedCalypso] • Date [16 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Ok, good concept, poor execution. Grammar is not what turned me off on this story. It was the characterization and structure. Everything was just so...so...happy campy. I tried to read it, I really did, but after about 8 pages I couldn't take it anymore. Also, you need to have spaces between your paragraphs for ease of readablity.

Like I said, I liked the concept. I personally liked the permanently souled Angel and the friendship between Angel and Willow. But I just can't see the total transparency happening between Scully and Xander.

Sorry if this is a bummer.
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [25 Jan 07] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from SciFigal
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Great cross over story. I really enjoyed reading it. How about a part 2 involving the "Fight the Future" story line?
Review By [SciFigal] • Date [30 Jul 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cosmic Cousins" from SpikeMyDrink
Review:
I haven't read the whole fic, but I want to say that I really like the concept, drawing the parallel between Willow/Xander and Scully/Mulder, and then the relationships you had going, but I couldn't keep reading because your grammar isn't too fabulous. Just wanted to alert you to this fact, because I know it will turn off some readers, like me. Also, your characterizations were a little off, especially of Buffy and Angel. I don't mean to be harsh, just trying to give some constructive criticism.
Review By [SpikeMyDrink] • Date [26 Jun 04] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cosmic Cousins" from Miceden
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love it wolud like to what happens next
Review By [Miceden] • Date [25 May 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of story "Cosmic Cousins" from Anonymous Reviewer
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you really should write a sequal to this story
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [31 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Cosmic Cousins" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I don't really have a review. I just want to point out that your last chapter before the Epilogue cuts off at the following sentence, which I'm sure you didn't intend:

'The man was only an inch or two shorter than the male FBI agent, th '

BillC
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [16 Mar 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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