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Review of chapter "Secret No Longer" from sciphy
lol honey....
Comments from author:
What can I say? It spoke to me. *grins*
Review By [sciphy] • Date [22 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secret No Longer" from Elleria
Love this.
Comments from author:
Glad to hear. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [11 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secret No Longer" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Given that they have each other's memories, what exactly is there left to explain?

EDIT: True, and even though they have the knowledge, talking about things always helps solidify them in a more personal way.
Comments from author:
I was thinking more along the lines of explaining why they never told each other about their secret lives, because I assume in this story that they've been good friends for quite some time. In my opinion, the better you get to know someone, the more comfortable you feel talking about your lives to each other which at some point may end in talking about your secret lives too.

I hope I cleared things up for you. Thanks for reviewing.

EDIT: Talking about it is a good thing here, I think. Better than just letting the memories speak for themselves.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secret No Longer" from Genuka
Oh you evil evil evil woman! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! I was really hoping someone would come along and do this challenge eventually. *bouncebouncebouncebouncebouncebouncebouncebouncebouncebouncebouncebounce
Comments from author:
I remembered writing a birthday story for you last year that was based on one of your challenges, so I thought to myself: why not see, if she's got any new challenges that speak to me. And this one did. ^_^

Glad you liked it, G.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secret No Longer" from lothlorien
Well that's just way too short... You need to write more.
Comments from author:
Well, the challenge only asked for what I thought would happen afterwards; how Giles and Daniel would react to having that knowledge. Nothing was said about giving more information on what happened the night before. You're just shit out of luck. *cheeky grin*
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secret No Longer" from Ramenth
Rather out of character on both sides. Part of this can be attributed to the short length, but still. At least some effort is needed to establish the ground rules for a story and explain the drastic divergences from canon characterization of both parties. It's a good start, but needs significant polishing.
Comments from author:
I based this story on a challenge I found here at Twisting the Hellmouth (challenge 5375 by Genuka which I make multiple references to in the story and summary). The person who issued the challenge clearly stated that they didn't want a background story; they only wanted someone to write what happened after Giles and Daniel both remember the other's secret life. This story was created based on that challenge and remains within the limits that were set.

Other than that challenge, I used my imagination to come up with their reactions which I feel are in character. I'm sorry to hear that you think they're out of character for both.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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