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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Cdog
Review:
Really violent and twisted take on what might have been... I like it!

I hope you do decide to continue with this because now I'm curios as to what the heck that demon was and just where the trio was sent to.
Comments from author:
Given the experiences the three of them went through, I can't see them NOT reacting violently when confronting their tormentors and those who facilitated the tormentors.

And I'll give you a little hint - the demon was Archduke Sebassis.

Although that won't necessarily mean anything about where the three of them ended up.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [6 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from chaoscrafter
Review:
dude excellent story so far cant wait for the next update. loving how you pumped us the slayers and Xander. couple of questions though. 1. what are each of the Scoobies individual abilities? (i mean i know you explained it before in the early chapters but it got confusing with the Scoobs being designated code names and i lost track of who got what in the end. i get that Xander is strong and fast and faith has the colossus thing going on with the technopathy as a bonus, and Buffy seems to be all about the stealth now.but they all have telepathy, was that a general ability or what?)
2. with the 2 moon thing i can only assume you are going into an Anime crossover or Stargate cross cause i cant think of a world where there are 2 moons and castles other than "familiar of zero" and one of the planets the Ori cultivated in "Stargate".
well that's all i have for now your doing a great job and cant wait to see what you do next.
chaoscrafter
Comments from author:
As far as the trio's powers are concerned, all I'll say right now is that's going to be addressed in the next story in the series.

Buffy's, Faith's and Xander's powers are all oriented in different aspects, and that's part of what they're going to have to deal with.

As far as where they've ended up, it's a location I created from a combination of several different series and games.
Review By [chaoscrafter] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Fayari
Review:
Heh, the police should have found the testicles inside Quentin Travers' stomach contents after the autopsy.
Comments from author:
That's pretty much a dead certainty. ;-)

The only question I've got is, did he have a red or white wine with them? ;-)
Review By [Fayari] • Date [13 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Katt
Review:
I love your revenge fics, even the over top ones but this is my favorite =) I'm not as fond of Xander as you are but you usually portray him in such a way that I actually like him more than normal.

I hope the sequel happens soon, i can't wait.


Katt
Comments from author:
Thanks, I appreciate hearing your views on my stories. I'm working on the sequel, among others, but I have no idea when it will be ready to post.
Review By [Katt] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Maltor
Review:
Excellent story. It will be interesting to see where you've sent them, as I get the feeling that despite the Stargate references, they're in another dimension and not just on another planet accessible by a gate. I hope the sequel will explore some of their interpersonal issues that resulted from their bonding. One of my lingering questions about the CVI and Faith's technomancy ability is are the CVI self replicating and if so can she infect others with a CVI as a possible means to control others or add them their collective.
Comments from author:
Well, you're right about them not being on any planet in any part of the Gate system, although, if I remember correctly, there was an instance where a malfunctioning gate sent them into an alternate universe, so I won't say that they couldn't end up there, eventually.

And all three are definitely going to be addressing all of the issues they've been avoiding for the past several weeks while they hunted down the NID bases, and tracked down Kinsey.

All I can say is that it's probably not going to be very pretty.
Review By [Maltor] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Thewander
Review:
Thats the end? great job on it. hope to see more of this story line some time.
Comments from author:
That's the end of *this* arc of the story.

I'm working on the next arc now.
Review By [Thewander] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Hanzo
Review:
a song for the end

FOOLY COOLY !

♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦

"Ride on Shooting Star",.

♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦

Slide of an orange reflects in the sky

Hanging the pride of a sponge

Spider

No need to hide

the premonition of life captured

it is like a colored dream

Ride on shooting star

I continued singing

like a shotgun with all my heart

A grunged hamster becomes more mature

and is accompanied by a lobster of revenge

Sniper

What do you say that

you can see in that framed world?

I want to touch it before you aim

Ride on shooting star

I'm looking for you and I'm having withdrawal symptoms

I lied to you

Ride on shooting star

I continued singing

like a shotgun with all my heart
Comments from author:
Okay, that's an anime series I wasn't even aware of, so that would be a big NO! as far as a crossover.

Can't say what it is yet, but it will make a sort of sense (I think) once I reveal where the Trio did appear.
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from djhardim
Review:
Possibilites:
"Laputa: Castle in the Sky" - only problem is the two moons. This story takes place on Earth.

ST:TOS - "The Cloud Minders" - can't remember how many moons the planet had.

Stargate: SG-1 - The Nox. Same problem with "The Cloud Minders"
Comments from author:
Nice guesses, bu not even close, my friend.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from frankocsic
Review:
Good read. Hope you make a sequel.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Trying to work on the next story in the series now.
Review By [frankocsic] • Date [25 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Morgomir
Review:
Interesting chapter. I hope its not the end. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Well, it's the end of this segment of the story, but there is definitely a lot more to come.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [25 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from MathiasBlue
Review:
Ohh! *Shocked Face* I'm getting tingles reading this! XD
Comments from author:
That's a good thing, right? ;-)
Review By [MathiasBlue] • Date [25 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and appropriate revenge with a nasty twist.
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)

Any everyone targeted got exactly what they deserved.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [25 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from draconis
Review:
Once you've got them in the lab with Walsh, you've got so many bits from so many cross-overs it's a real challenge to figure them all out while reading...but it sure is fun! I kinda surprised myself that I was able to keep up with them.

And, I loved the "And popular fiction had so quickly captured the public's view of what the world expected of a ‘Mad Scientist,’ that it had quickly evolved into a cliché. Not that it would ever stop a true mad scientist." throw-away line. (I'll even let you in on a little secret...you're absolutely right...it doesn't. In fact, Senators and Generals quite expect it of us these days.)
Comments from author:
Based on my own experience, Senators and Generals sometimes appear to have very little connection to Real Life (tm). ;-)

Glad you're enjoying the story.
Review By [draconis] • Date [25 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from FireWolfe
Review:
Great story and it has so much potential for sequels. SGC. Hogwarts any number of cross overs. Hell it could even cross over with heman with the two moons thing.
Well done I love it.
Fire
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback.

As far as the possible crossovers are concerned, I don't think that anyone has guessed exactly where the Trio has ended up.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [25 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from FariaLyton
Review:
EVIL ending. Completely evil. May Buffy slay you for that evil.

That said, amazing story. I hope you do eventually have more ideas to work with in it.

Edit: Good to hear.
Comments from author:
First off, thank you. ;-)

Second, I have the next story plotted out and am working on it now, in between other stories my muse is directing me to write, too.
Review By [FariaLyton] • Date [25 Jun 11] • Not Rated
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