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Review of chapter "Surprises & Dobby (Sometimes Mix)" from Letomo
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Review By [Letomo] • Date [4 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprises & Dobby (Sometimes Mix)" from Letomo
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I'm just sorry this appears to be a dead fic - it really is very good, introduces new characters, but they are well-rounded, and they seem to fit together [or not!] where they need to. I do wish the muse would strike with more inspiration.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [4 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprises & Dobby (Sometimes Mix)" from Silver
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I thoroughly enjoyed this - great ida, I mean it just figures that Andrew would name his kids after Star Wars characters! Absolutely adore this! However, I am disappointed that it has not been updated in over a year! Unfortunately it doies not appear that you will be updating anytime soon, so I just want to thank you for the great read and I hope you do come back to updating this.
Review By [Silver] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Surprises & Dobby (Sometimes Mix)" from twlight
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Oh how I love this story let me count the ways...... I can't the number is just to high. I love how you change the pov's for each chapter. I do however wish that you had continued that chapter that you summoned James and Lily Potter so that we could know how Harry spent that time with his parents. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [27 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wizards Are Coming!" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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9.

nice summer for Harry and nice gift at the end.

10.

nice that most took Hermione's 'secret' rather well so far.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wizards at Sanctuary" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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6.

hmm Spike and Billie teaching at Hogwarts? could be fun.

7.

chaos all around and now Luna is on board....ohhh my......

8.

hmm nice view into the slayer part...that will be fun if they all come together :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wizards at Sanctuary" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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ahh yes the future won't be easy for Hermione, I fear.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [25 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprises & Dobby (Sometimes Mix)" from thundever
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Great story and chapters, brilliant interactions and characterizations, please update soon.
Review By [thundever] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Surprises & Dobby (Sometimes Mix)" from BrownFinderth
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SkylarRose has a very good story going on here!!! I like the mix of people a lot! I do hope that the author is able to return soon to this piece and continue to write it!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [4 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Potter in San Francisco" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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rofl...nice meeting with the Halliwell clan......
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Demonic Plants and Other Beings" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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rofl...a Demonflesh eating plant?
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprises & Dobby (Sometimes Mix)" from (Recent Donor)cauchymean
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Overall, a good effort, although some family trees would be helpful for keeping track of all the characters, both canon and OCs.

However, I do feel there are some weaknesses and unexplained or insufficiently explained plot points in the story:

- Why does Harry bond so quickly and completely with the Halliwells as compared to the Weasleys?

- Not that the story should dwell on it, but wouldn't someone have mentioned to the Halliwells that Harry was emotionally neglected and somewhat psychologically abused as a child?

- If Hermione is really loyal to Harry, why didn't she tell him that she had talked about him to the Watchers? Preferably, she should have told him beforehand.

- Relating to the previous point: Various people beyond Dumbledore are still deciding matters that pertain to Harry without his knowledge or direct input. (Given Buffy's experience with that type of treatment, I could see her as a proponent of including Harry in the information loop.)

- I'm concerned that you are falling into the trap where the Halliwell sisters or Willow are such uber-witches that one has to wonder why they don't just take care of Voldemort on their own given that you have described him as not representing that great a threat. So how does the prophecy play into this story? Is Voldemort more of a concern than they realize? Does Harry have some talent or ability unique to him?
Review By [(Recent Donor)cauchymean] • Date [25 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Summer Time" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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1. Prologue

interesting start.....


2. Summer Time

hmm I'm still curios and will check ch 3 out :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [12 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprises & Dobby (Sometimes Mix)" from ahindle
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Love it!!! Cant wait to see where your taking this!!
Review By [ahindle] • Date [17 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Surprises & Dobby (Sometimes Mix)" from Naitch
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You know, when Hermione revealed her secret to Ron and Ginny, and they reacted the way they did, I figured one of two things were going to happen:
We'd get a Ginny-Bashing, Ron's an idiot kind of story,
or
Ginny'd come around fairly quickly, and Ron would eventually.

You have no idea how glad I was when I read chapter 18, and you, in one short scene, redeemed Ron. Yes, Ron is a hot head, impulsive, insecure and brash, but he is a loyal friend and a lot of authors forget that. I'm glad you didn't, and I'm looking forward to seeing what you are going to do with him.

Great story, can't wait to read more.
Review By [Naitch] • Date [31 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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