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Review of chapter "...strength born of desperation..." from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Ouch.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [15 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...strength born of desperation..." from Rune
Review:
I gave you a ten rating because unlike JKR you killed of a Malfoy.
JKR let the scum live and escape justice.

Congratulations for being better than a world acclaimed author, even if most of the people doing the acclaiming are brain dead fools.

Thanks.
Review By [Rune] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...strength born of desperation..." from VillageOrchid
Review:
Very dramatic!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...strength born of desperation..." from Elleria
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Sad. Going to read the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [11 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...strength born of desperation..." from clei
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Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying this. Sorry if the ficlet style is bothersome. I set it up that way mostly because there's such great length of times that are simply the same as if would be in the show or in the books.

Narcissa's pregnancy made her truly consider what was happening and it let Lucius feel like he had a safety net. Draco might not care for the thought of a sibling; but it's not really enough to change events as written in the books.

At least, not until she gave birth and the truth of her child's heritage came to light.

As for Voldy...he's gonna have other problems to worry about. The main shift in continuity just happened; permanently linking the Scoobies to the magical world through baby Alexander.
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I'm wondering....does this mean that Buffy,Willow and Giles will become baby Alexander's Godparents?
Comments from author:
That's a possiblity that I wasn't planning on really exploring. Either way, could you imagine any of them refusing to help if something threatened Xander's son no matter who was named godparent?
Review By [clei] • Date [9 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...strength born of desperation..." from DemonChyld
Review:
Oh wow! Sucks that Narcissa died that way and am wondering if the Aurors are going to take him away or ignore since it was adultery! Hopefully they do their job, especially since he killed her! Xander is really going to be surprised when Snape shows up...can't wait to read that meeting! Very good job with this story!
Comments from author:
It very much sucks. As for the Aurors...tough call. He's been outted as a DE, so half of them want him arrested. He's also a pureblood with lots of gold, so half of them would take the bribe. (It's traditional) Still, this is the society that (kills)shuns squibs and muggles...so the corupt ones would probably go through the motions without putting in a real effort. Unless they are ones that really do believe that DE's should be arrested...then they might try.
Review By [DemonChyld] • Date [8 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...strength born of desperation..." from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
Ouch...Has Draco survived so far? Well written, but a bit of bad planning on Narcissa's part I'd say.
Comments from author:
Yes, Draco is still alive. In Narcissa's defence, it's hard to plan when to give birth. The baby's usually the one that decides that. Plus, her options were pretty limited. Still, you're right. A contingency plan would have been helpful.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [8 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...strength born of desperation..." from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you! :) More soon.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [8 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...strength born of desperation..." from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Comments from author:
Thanks! :)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...strength born of desperation..." from kyzhart
Review:
I' loving these fics but why are they all stand alones rather than chapter? I can't wait to see Xan's reaction to the baby but also to Narcissa's murder.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying this so far. I set them up as ficlets mainly because of the amount of 'time' between the scenes. There was months between the 1st and 2nd as well as several more months between the 2nd and 3rd. What's more; the events paralleled the books and tv show at that time. It's only now that Narcissa is dead and her child on it's way to SunnyD that events will be different.
Review By [kyzhart] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...strength born of desperation..." from Jaylynn
Review:
Oh shit, I wasn't expecting that. Good bit of surprise though and I look forward to seeing where this leads.
Comments from author:
Good! :) I'm glad it was a surprise twist. Still, I think it makes sense. Narcissa was deluding herself that she could get away with birthing a child that wasn't Lucius'. He might put on airs and pretend to nobility, but he's a Death Eater to the bone.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...strength born of desperation..." from ChiVayne
Review:
Narcissa was doomed and she knew that, but had the strength to save her child. I am looking forward to seeing what Snape and the Scoobies make of each other.
Comments from author:
Sometimes...people can do amazing things when there is no other choice. She gave up on Lucius & Draco long ago and is banking everything on Alexander.

*giggles* I keep picturing Snape dealing with dirty nappies & baby bottles.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...strength born of desperation..." from FariaLyton
Review:
This is very typical of Xander's dating life, isn't it?
Comments from author:
Yeah...it kinda is. Narcissa is (was) beautiful, dangerous, and dark. So...of course he's attracted to her. Plus as a bonus, she has a whole heap of problems that are just preparing to jump up and bite him on the ass. *grin* So yeah...typical Xander girl.
Review By [FariaLyton] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...strength born of desperation..." from (Current Donor)kcl
Review:
I am really liking this 'series', although I would be happier if the 'episodes' were chapters in the same story. I look forward to seeing where you take this. Nice job!
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying this so far. I'm sorry the formatting is bothering you. I didn't have this as a single story due to the length of 'time' between them. Still, I hope you continue to enjoy future ficlets.
Review By [(Current Donor)kcl] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...strength born of desperation..." from Fyrloche
Review:
great story. Looking forward to what Xander will do. I doubt that he will go for revenge at this time, but I'm sure he'll think about it. Be interesting to find out if Giles knows about the Wizardly world.
Comments from author:
Thanks!

Well, the next part deals with that so I won't give it away, but I can say it'll be a bit of a shock.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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