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Review of chapter "Returning" from twlight
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Wonderful. I love this wonderful wonderful story. I love the fact that Dawn made Dumbles tell Harry why Riddle was after him. I do hope that Dawn makes sure that Harry still has fun in school but trains him for the worst if necessary.
Review By [twlight] • Date [14 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Returning" from Starfox
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Very good and original Story, nicely done Dawn and Sirius, and a logical AU.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [30 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Returning" from Obsidian
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great story, thanks
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [16 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Returning" from ChaosLady
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I should have read this one first. I would have been less confused.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [14 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stones" from SpacedCadet
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I just discovered this series and I am enjoying it.

I could enjoy it even more if there was more to read!

Please update often.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [12 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stones" from JonnWolfe
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Liking this series, and I hope it continues. Some of it went by a bit fast, and the duel between Dawn and the staff seemed to be a bit ... rushed and one sided. I mean, learning Wizard style magic in one month seems really out there, even for her.

But, the interactions between Harry, Sirius, and Dawn work really well. Having the Blacks be professors is interesting, and I'm wondering how Dawn became qualified. Did she take her O.W.L. and N.E.W.T equivalences?

Hehe... Dawn Black... there's a joke in there somewhere. I just have to find it.
Review By [JonnWolfe] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stones" from MarcusSLazarus
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The plot changes might be minor so far, but Jocelyn looks like she could be an interesting character, and it should DEFINITELY be interesting to witness the long-term effects of Sirius and Dawn as teachers (Maybe Sirius could do DADA in fifth year while they bring back Charity Burbage from wherever she is in order to keep Umbridge out while Dumbledore does more research to find a better candidate?).

In any case, keep up the great work (Although I stand by my earlier request for Harry/Ginny to remain intact)!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [27 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stones" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
I love this series!

Very good take on the first HP book I hope you continue.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [15 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stones" from Keshkreature
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I love the story. Maybe since Sirius isn't an issue, Peter should be?
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [7 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stones" from valdimarian
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If Serious isn't an issue, why can't Peter be the issue? If you're trying to keep the timeline clean.

Another Goblin Rebellion? If you're willing to say "Screw the timeline"

Move up Dolores to book 3? She's a nasty woman, and I'd love to see Dawn rip her a new one (or turn her into a rat "Goddess Hecetae! Before you, unclean things crawl.") Then for book 5 just have the ministry be ineffective... or use this as a good turning point so book 4 happens almost the same, but book 5 you can have a GOOD minister take over and turn the wizarding world on it's head. (Usually Amelia Bones)
Review By [valdimarian] • Date [5 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stones" from MistofRainbows
Review:
More than a bit irked over the stone... honestly ninja... I'm not really sure that voldemort's spirit could have done crap against Dawn considering the stupid thing couldn't do crap to the older teens when they broke fragments of his soul. I think Harry having a piece of him and being small and already messed up... sigh basically that just feels like a ninja oh let's stick to stupid cannon and break the stone of immortality... especially when hey it would be very useful to have for Dawn. Sigh... what ever...


As for the rest neat but it still feels like nothing much changed... it's still somehow his fault and responsibility to go down there... mostly for not at least the prophecy is out in the open though I would have expected a how did he come back part. Also honest Dawn should have told the healer lady that she's an adult and to stuff it. (other than it was a good way to end the scene.)

As for third year, I suggest pulling in the werewolf, doing some pranking and driving Dawn crazy because there isn't any thing bad around the school.

Edit: Sorry, yes I'm enjoying the story. I got sidetracked with the couple of things I didn't like and forgot to mention that I'm enjoying the story.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [5 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stones" from AnFan
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Nice story I've enjoyed reading it.

For third year, since you've changed the world with adding Dawn, you may want to add in more from her world. If this is a different universe, only similar then you can throw in elements of Sunnydale nightlife or big bads without worrying about it. If it is her world with time shifted, you have to be a bit more judicious about what you throw in, but it can still be the time that Peter is found if you don't have him show up in 2nd year.

Another suggestion is that something can go wrong or become troubled due to the Wicca knowledge and training. Maybe the work that Dawn is doing with her daughter catches the attention of other practitioners...

Lots of room for stuff if you don't limit youself strictly to HP and Dawn.

Please keep up the good work. Love reading it.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [4 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stones" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stones" from StoryBlender
Review:
Third year. Bellatrix Lestrange escapes Azkaban
Review By [StoryBlender] • Date [4 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stones" from AllenPitt
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Third year. But of course! Peter, caught and put into Azkaban makes a dramatic escape! Dementors surround the school, everyone out to get the 'prisoner of azkaban!' -- Suspicion surrounds Remus. But it turns out Peter is after something else... (ok, I've got no idea what. Maybe the Chamber?) Maybe the Library of Ravenclaw. Something. He'd be working for V., because nobody else would protect him, so it'd be like Goblet one year early.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [4 May 12] • Not Rated
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