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Review of chapter "Parting of Ways" from DeaconKrow
Review:
Hey, I know you just started writing again recently and I just re-read this story. I figured I'd throw this out hoping you might be inspired. This is a great story and I have hoped for an update for a long time now. To be fair there are a lot of your stories that I like, but I wanted to throw this out. :)
Review By [DeaconKrow] • Date [30 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Parting of Ways" from race
Review:
Would still love to see this story contenued when you can.
Review By [race] • Date [5 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snow daze..." from WaterFire
Review:
Good idea so far.

From the first chapter, I thought this story was going to be all telling, not showing.

Then I started on the second chapter and it is really good.
I just finished watching Avatar and it's cool with Xander as Aang's adopted big brother.

How old is Xander in this one, does he have two eyes still?
Yay for Xander getting a cool power.
Review By [WaterFire] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Parting of Ways" from deamon
Review:
I would love for a sequel to this. or maybe a far sequel in the legend of korra verse. where he ends up there somehow and meets korra.
Comments from author:
have not seen Legend of Korra, so i will most likely not cross that one, i do/did have plans for Xander to go to war against the Fire Nation... but until my real life calms down a bit i am not going to be able to swing that.
Review By [deamon] • Date [30 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Parting of Ways" from SpacedCadet
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I had never even considered this crossover a possibility, but for as far as it went, this was very interesting.

I'm sorry there won't be more.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [17 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Parting of Ways" from ScreamingFlamingos
Review:
Wonderful!!!!! So Sad that this won't be continued, but it was an excellent story!
Review By [ScreamingFlamingos] • Date [29 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Parting of Ways" from starfire
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this was an awesome story and i hope at some point you'll continue it.
Review By [starfire] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Parting of Ways" from Teucrian
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That was an excellent story. Especially good was the balance between realism/cynicism and optimism/idealism. Hope you get around to writing a sequel or epilogue sometime!
Review By [Teucrian] • Date [25 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Parting of Ways" from Morgomir
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Sorry for the late review (exams). Great chapter. Keep up the good work whatever it may be. Love the story and your vision for it.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Parting of Ways" from wraithrune
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Love this :)
Review By [wraithrune] • Date [26 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Parting of Ways" from Genuka
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I really hope you come back and work on this some more or make another story for a series. I ^loved^ this!!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [23 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Spirit World" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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Ok, the story is going off the rails at this point. I typically avoid Xander-centric stories as 9 out of 10 them turn out to be pure Xander Stu fics. This story has danced on the edge of that for chapters now while still managing to be a decent semi-Fix Fic.

But it's now just leapt off the slippery slope. *Absolutely nothing* in the show ever suggested that the Hei Bai forest spirit was the spirit of *all* forests and *all* wood and plants on the entire planet, or that it had real-time control of all wood and all plants everywhere to this degree! This is deus ex machina of the worst kind, pulled from nowhere, allowing the protagonists to push a "we win, you lose" button with no real in-story justification.
Comments from author:
was there anything that said he wasn't?

now that may seem like a copout statement but consider the other spirits, Roku's Dragon assistant just as an example, for the most part all they could do was communicate and sometimes take form, yet even without the equinox AND with most of it's power base (The forest) Destroyed Hai-Bai managed to take full corporeal form AND destroy a small town kidnap Dozens of people and TRANSORT THEM into the spirit world, a task that requires considerable effort from even the Avatar all with very little effort, it was far more powerful than any of the other spirits with the exception of the big sea creature thing in the last episode that let Aang break a persons bending arts... heck the only other spirits to EVER show that level of power was the Twin Moon fish Spirits in the Water Tribe, and even then only during the full moon.

in all what would ever make you think it was JUST a forest spirit?

secondly it doesn't push a 'We win' Scenario, in fact it pushes the Fire Nation into finding it's own spirits for power leading to an arms race very similar to the Nuclear arms race of the fifies, they are already prepared to kill spirits (Again the fish Spirits) making the Socio-political climate FAR more dangerous and interesting in the future, Because seriously, who do you suspect the Fire lord will send out to get Spirit Allies? And precisly how stable will those spirits be?

The water tribe already has some, the Earth nation will need to jump on the bandwagon or be overrun quickly and things begin to spiral...

I'm sorry you didn't enjoy the fic, don't worry it will not be continued anytime soon.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [23 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Parting of Ways" from AlphaBeta
Review:
First LOVE the story! Second, sad to see that you have to stop for now. But, it also sounds like you will be back. Will be looking forward to your next instalment then. Hopefully it won't be to long.
Comments from author:
I am hoping to return eventualy, but i need to get some things straight first so it may be a while.

I am glad you enjoyed the fic.
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [22 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Parting of Ways" from Cdog
Review:
This was a good story.

One that I hope you are able to continue one day.
Comments from author:
Maybe one day, i really liked this little world, it was fun to play in...
Review By [Cdog] • Date [20 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Parting of Ways" from DeaconKrow
Review:
Always a good read. I really enjoyed this chapter. I can't wait to see what comes next. Thanks for posting.
Comments from author:
I am glad you enjoyed it, but like i said it will probably be a while before this is continued.
Review By [DeaconKrow] • Date [20 May 12] • Not Rated
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