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Review of chapter "...a whirlwind of air and magic..." from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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And so if he won that would make him very happy... so in the moment of his victory he is defeated. Anya should have had a hand in this.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [15 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...a whirlwind of air and magic..." from Rune
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And a new and unique way of dealing with the horcrux mess JKR came up with. Too bad Willow did not just fry Tom.

Congrats on a new thing in fanfiction. Using the Gypsy curse to deal with horcruxes.

The fics may be short but I like them. Thank you.
Review By [Rune] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...a whirlwind of air and magic..." from (Current Donor)vidicon
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Now that is an interesting use for the Blood Curse...Willow on a magic high. Oh dear...Ah well, at least she got to enjoy Hogwarts...
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [15 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...a whirlwind of air and magic..." from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [15 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...a whirlwind of air and magic..." from stonewar
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awesome sauce!
Some interaction between Xander and his son please?
Comments from author:
Thanks! Glad you liked it.

I hadn't really thought about any Xand-Alex scenes...but I could prbably come up with something.
Review By [stonewar] • Date [13 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...a whirlwind of air and magic..." from Waverly
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That. Was. Awesome. I've never really considered restoring his soul as a way to defeat Voldemort. Fantastic XD
Comments from author:
Thank you! :-) I'm glad you liked. Yeah...Willow totally kicked ass in this one. Volde-snake won't know what hit him.
Review By [Waverly] • Date [13 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...a whirlwind of air and magic..." from KyrissDraconis
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Awesome!!! Totally, Epic-ly Awesome!
Comments from author:
Thank you! :-) *preens slightly* Glad you liked it!
Review By [KyrissDraconis] • Date [13 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...a whirlwind of air and magic..." from Cutiepie
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I'm just wondering if Voldie felt the reuniting of his soul and its being replaced in his body. And, if he did, did he recognize what had happened at all. Having his soul intact again MIGHT affect his sanity somewhat, or he may be too far gone that way. Someone else mentioned in their review about Voldie maybe making another horcrux before Harry can get to him, but unless he understood all that was involved in Willow's spell, he wouldn't even think of doing so (since he had previously made so many, and fragmented his soul so completely). I'm really enjoying your little series of stories here. Keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
I honestly don't know. It was never mentioned in the books that he could feel the destruction of his horcruxes, so he might not understand what had happened to him. Although I truly think he would recognize that 'something' magical happened -just not what.

As for his sanity; it might be effected a bit but honestly, he was a nutcase before his first horcrux and spending over a decade as a disembodied wraith cracked him even further. Plus, the bits and pieces that were entombed in inanimate objects or spent time in hell probably wouldn't be enough to stop him from being a raving howling lunatic. (picture Spike in the school basement after his soul was returned)

Anyway, I'm glad you are enjoying this so far. More coming soon.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [13 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...a whirlwind of air and magic..." from Elleria
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Interesting twist on the Scoobies helping with the whole Voldie business, very unique so far as I've seen. Love this series.
Comments from author:
Thanks! *grin* Glad you like it. Um, I think this is pretty different, but I couldn't say for sure. I don't remember any stories with Xan & Cissy hooking up and having a kid...but I could be wrong.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...a whirlwind of air and magic..." from mountainelements
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Good way to get rid of Voldemort. I wonder if getting all of those pieces of his soul back will affect him psychologically at all. I'm also worried about whether he'll make another Horcrux before Harry (or whoever) can kill him.

The only downside with this series is that you skip over some scenes that I would like to have read. For example, I was hoping for a story about all of the changes Xander has to make to accommodate his son and when he realizes that it was all worth it. I also wanted to read about Harry and Hermione's first meeting with the Scoobies. Oh well.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Oh...you mean, like will he go all crazy and broody with the guilt and remorse? Possible, but I doubt it. He was a murderer way before he split his soul. It's that whole insane thing he got from his Gaunt Family heritage, I think.

Yeah, I see what you mean about missing scenes. I've been moving this pretty fast and not really going into lots of details. I might at some point go back and fill in those blanks. I don't know. It might be neat to see how Xander and gang deal with a newborn infant dumped in thier laps just as things with ADAM are heating up. Maybe explain why Anya isn't around. Also maybe Narcissa's trip to the Hellmouth and her meeting the gang.
Review By [mountainelements] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...a whirlwind of air and magic..." from angeluscado
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This is an excellent, excellent series. I can't wait to see what else you do with it :)
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. :) I'm glad you are liking this so far. There is more to come.
Review By [angeluscado] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...a whirlwind of air and magic..." from Almond
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Brilliant!! I love witchy Willow! And Minerva's point of view was just the right touch. Great job!
Comments from author:
Thanks! :) Willow's channeling was so different from what Minerva does that I found it neat to see it all from her POV. She was impressed...as she should be. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [Almond] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...a whirlwind of air and magic..." from Bugeyedmonster
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I've been enjoying this series. If you feel like writing more I will read it.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you like it so far. There will be more soon.
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...a whirlwind of air and magic..." from FariaLyton
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I have to say, Voldemort dying because he had a happy while torturing a muggle would be hilarious. Of course, him getting his happy with Bellatrix (and her not noticing) would also be funny.

Edit: That's *exactly* what I was thinking!
Comments from author:
*snicker* I now have this image of Bella drapped over an insensate and drooling Voldemort while cooing, "OH Volde-bear...that was the best time yet!"
Review By [FariaLyton] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...a whirlwind of air and magic..." from ChiVayne
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Very clever use of the soul curse. I'm guessing Willow or Giles came up with the idea.
Comments from author:
Thank you. No doubt. They're good at twisting things around to find new and interesting uses for stuff. This curse fits, I think.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Not Rated
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