This was very very good. Exteremly epic idea. Great plot idea. Luicas must not have had Draco by then. One's got to wonder what will happen to him, once old Voldy finds out his kid was taken. And the wife/mother has vanished off the face of the planet. I really loved this. I've read it about nine or so times. Before I got registered here. Great idea. Its turly one of those under used ideas. That really should be explored a bit more. I would love to see more on this. But baring that I say to you, take a bow this was great.
Okay. Excuse me for a second. I need to channel my mother and grandmother for this.
Ohh. My. Gaaawwwd.
Imagine that in a southern accent for the full effect.
Soo... yeah.
This is all kinds of crack-y, but it's well-written crack which is my favourite kind. Not that I like the other crack, 'cause drugs are bad and I need a drug habit like I need a -
Right. Off topic. Anyway, it's crack-y but sad too. Poor Severus. If he ever gets those memories back he's going to be messed up in even more ways than he already is. I really feel bad for him. It's been thirty years since my mom's twin boys were miscarried and she still feels the pain and misplaced guilt. So, this is just an awful thing to do to Severus, but then it is Lucius Malfoy and Albus Dumbledore we're talking about. They need to get a taste of just what a vengeance demon can do. Perhaps someone can introduce one to Severus if he ever gets his memories back?
I love this fic and I would love to see more set in this universe. Please!
Lol. Brilliant story. First with Snape getting pregnant, and then Buffy being swapped again to land with Hank and Joyce. Now even Dumbledore doesn't know where she is. Good luck to anyone trying to find her! But poor Snape. Abused by his 'friend' and doesn't remember a single thing to take his revenge. Should have uttered the killing curse instead of stunning him.
Thanks for writing! :)
Review By [toastbox] • Date [13 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Oh, my. What an interesting twist. More, more, more, please. Can we have another story that will tell us what happens when the events get revealed? Watching Severus on a rampage would be fun, especially if it means he can survive the events in Deathly Hallows. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters on more stories sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Ah, delicious crack. Awesome. XD If you ever feel inspired to continue, I'd love to see Severus' reaction to his unknown daughter, and the ass-kicking Dumbles would get for this whole thing!
Review By [Waverly] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Well, isn't magic useful, I think. I was certainly not expecting that. Poor Snape :( No wonder he was so depressed all the time, he didn't even know what he was missing.
Comments from author:
The thought of Snape with postpartum depression just cracked me up, though I know postpartum depression isn't actually funny. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Holy crap on a cracker! You know, I'd love to see the charms wear off when Buffy's called as a Slayer. Oh the havoc it would cause in the Wizarding World.
Comments from author:
Can you see it? Snape sniping at his Potions class and in runs Buffy..."MOM!!! Can you help me with my hemline?"
