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Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from ChaosLady
Review:
Good story!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from JonnWolfe
Review:
Brilliant work. Hope you get a chance to come back to this, because I'd like to see how you spin things.
Review By [JonnWolfe] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Darkcrest
Review:
interesting start to what could have been a great story to bad it seems to be abandoned
Review By [Darkcrest] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from BritneyandJacob
Review:
Excellent two chapters. I love them. Please continue. I would love to see where this goes.
Review By [BritneyandJacob] • Date [7 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from FaithandFrodoforever
Review:
Excellent two chapters. I love them. Please do continue. I look forward to the next chapter.
Review By [FaithandFrodoforever] • Date [28 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from mwinter
Review:
Chapter 2 really 3 please?! Awaiting more.
Review By [mwinter] • Date [7 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [15 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Narf
Review:
Nice keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [15 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from jormunguard
Review:
Good start to the story. I'm very interested in seeing where you take this. One request though, please don't make the Scoobies out to be complete a-holes I've read too many of those.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [14 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from mithrilandtj
Review:
COOL!
Can't wait for more!

PS: I still think Harry should've been allowed to pack first.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [14 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from trongod
Review:
Well, you done cleared up a lot of my questions from the first part - rather brilliantly, I might add - although I still can't determine yet how long she's been in town. Figure, though, it hasn't been long and that Kakkie and Co. were on her tail pretty much the whole route.

Hoping that she has yet to do the Bronze Beatdown And Intro; it'd be funny to see it with Harry there and the Scoobies - and Giles - assuming that Harry's some sort of Watcher assigned due to his "youthful appearance"; Lord knows they never bothered checking out Gwen Post when she got into town. His accent, along with the properly tweedy clothes - conjured or transfigured for the occasion - would boost that...
Or, you know, you could go the far more boring and plebeian route of them just telling the truth... Hmm, just imagining the googly eyes of Willow and Giles at the thought of extra dimensional travelers and their being chosen by some mysterious Woman - whom I really hope we see more of!!! - as Xander jokes, Buffy whines about why isn't she getting a cute assistant (shutting Xander up fast). Jenny Calendar around? PLEASE, PLEASE say she is!! Like to see the internally older Harry sparking with her as a jealous/amused Faith looks on, a confused and really jealous Giles tries (unsuccessfully) to interfere, Xander take bets and notes, Willow bursts into hyper babble mode, Joyce starts flirting with Harry who responds VERY eagerly causing a fun time for the majority of readers...
Review By [trongod] • Date [14 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from jimk
Review:
Very nice! Definitely one of the best Harry/BtVS crossover ideas that I've seen.
Review By [jimk] • Date [14 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Narf
Review:
Not a bad start. Keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [13 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from trongod
Review:
Other than Hermione being fracking stupid enough to love Ron, I like this... Now, if you'd said that Ron was about to propose the next hour/day, and Harry had convinced himself it 'was all for the Greater Good", I'd've enjoyed it better.

All that notwithstanding, I really like the idea of this, and sincerely hope that you continue it - and bring back the Mysterious And Annoying Woman so we can either be told Who She is or , more likely to be fun, get clues to What She is in the Multiverse.

Wondering just how long Faith has been in town so far; if she just arrived - my personal favorite - she's still paranoid but extremely hopeful of finding friends, companionship, and help. While she did get the last in canon, the first two were more of a question mark due to Buffy and Willow's insecurities and jealousies, Xander's hormones - although, I'm convinced he really wanted to be her friend, since that was the niche that had been established by all the women in his life to date (except the more demonic and the poor mummy Ampata; now there was a gutsy woman!). Still think they could have been great friends and possibly a romance later had the H & H's not overtook them both the Night Of the Sisterhood Of Jhe Met The Detroit Chariot...

Where was I? ... Oh, right! Faith in town time frame. Just in town: suspicious of the Green Eyed Dude at her door; I'm assuming Harry is turned to about her age for better interaction - two teens hanging don't get as much notice as a teen and an adult. Harry needs some fast talk, but the English accent will be a boon - Faith will relate it to her Watcher, painful though that is, and will allow some small trust. Harry gets her packed up and out of the cesspit and into a better hotel, pending buying an actual home... Hey, does Harry have funding here????

Faith in town a while: Paranoid, hurt at the Scoobies and Watcher(s) treatment, probably getting more and more PTSD influenced depressed and suffering from major lack of sleep (nightmares, 'neighbors') not eating well due to being broke, etc; Harry shows up with story = Faith tries to use his spine for a floor lamp...
Review By [trongod] • Date [13 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Darklight
Review:
Interesting start, Harry did agree a little to fast to leaving and accepting the job, without getting the specifics first. Looking forward to see what changes will occur to Faith. Keep the fic centered around Faith and not so much with the scoobs.

Keep the chapters coming.
Review By [Darklight] • Date [13 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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