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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Comments from author:
I couldn't figure out how to fit a 'Candy-gram for Mr. Mongo' joke in, though. ;-(
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [17 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rune
While all crossovers are good, some are good, others are Good, and a few are GOOD.

I'm sorry but you lost points changing Xander into a shark thing.

The multiple activation that Willow did is very cool tho.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story.

And I can't recall ever seeing anyone have Xander shift into a shark, and I was going for something new.
Review By [Rune] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Awesome! If anyone deserves a power up it is the scoobies! And Green is a good colour for Dawn :)
Comments from author:
Yep. Screw the Balance, and the Powers That Be (Bastards).

And yes, (Mean) Green is a perfect color for Dawn. can't wait for Buffy's reaction. ;-)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Maltor
Maybe if Dawn still has access to her power she can give Xander the ability to shift back to a more normal human appearance like I have a feeling she gave her she-hulk form. I'm curious what you had that energy wave do to his kid. Though given what you've shown us of Sam so far, it would serve her right to be breast feeding him at the time his new shark-like teeth come in.
Comments from author:
All I can say right now is that while Dawn can control her own form, it's not necessarily correct to assume that she can do anything about anyone else's changes.

And all Sam has really been doing is trying to protect her child from what she believes might an exceedingly dangerous influence (i.e., Xander). Wouldn't you do the same thing?
Review By [Maltor] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LordSia
You know, thinking about how good sharks are at tracking blood... I suddenly realized a lot of potential in the concept of a shark-based Vampire Hunter.
Comments from author:
Yep, a sense of smell that would put a bloodhound to shame, as well as some other senses other species don't possess. ;-)
Review By [LordSia] • Date [16 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from malkome

Comments from author:
Yep. ;-)
Review By [malkome] • Date [14 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Nuklear
heh Like the new part but now you got me wondering if it changed Xander like that what did it do to his kid...
Comments from author:
That's something that will be addressed in upcoming stories.
Review By [Nuklear] • Date [13 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from atticus
Oh god I have to stop laughing before something ruptures.
Comments from author:
Yep. My beta, Bill Haden, came up with that one, and I'm just jealous I didn't think of it myself. ;-)
Review By [atticus] • Date [13 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mountainelements
It's sad, but it makes sense about Xander's son. Does Xander get to see him, or has Sarah taken legal actions to stop him? I'm not really sure where you're going with all the superhero characters, as I thought the series was supposed to be about Xander and Buffy's relationships with their LA one-night marriages.
Comments from author:
Well, to begin with, any records Xander have are merely accusations/suspicions that the Sunnydale PD had made, and given that their level of competence and integrity is less than flawless to begin with, I don't see that having any effect on Xander having access to his child, especially since juvenile records are sealed and inaccessible (in most cases) once the subject turns eighteen.

The fact that Sam was able to get any information from sealed records whatsoever would have no legal bearing whatsoever in any sort of custody hearing, since that information would most likely be inadmissible, and the fact that it was illegally acquired might actually have a negative effect on Sam's credibility and bearing.

The fact that Xander apparently has a sealed record with military connections is also irrelevant, since it's sealed and can't be discussed for security reasons.

Sam would have to make a case that Xander is unfit to have any contact with his child, and that's a pretty difficult task to do, given his current status.

It currently is more that Sam doesn't want him to be involved that is the issue, and that will be addressed in future episodes.

And there's going to be more events involving Buffy in the future, too.
Review By [mountainelements] • Date [13 Jun 11] • Not Rated
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