Review of chapter "The Last Team Member" from
vladtReview:
loved the ending paragraph. thank you for the entertaining.
Review By [
vladt] • Date [8 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Desotos, Spyders and Impalas" from
vladtReview:
hope you are having as much fun writing this as i am reading it. thank you.
Review By [
vladt] • Date [8 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from
JazzibearReview:
This is most promising, and very well written: I shall follow it with great interest. What on earth is wrong with Buffy and Dawn?
One question: why switch to past tense in the last but one paragraph?
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Normally I love Buffy and Dawn, but for the purposes of this fic, I needed Spike to take squad three away from them all, and a fight would allow them to take off with no strings and a way to meet all th other characters on Pippa's list.
Thanks for the tense info... i missed that when i was editing!
CleopatraKahlan
Review By [
Jazzibear] • Date [15 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
