Review of chapter "Cinnamon Roots" from MyrddinIgnisMagus
I quite enjoyed that, a little too 'the drama' for my normal taste in fics, but it was nice.
Review By [MyrddinIgnisMagus
] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cinnamon Roots" from Roth
Beautiful angsty story. It's well written and I do like a well done Buffy/Willow pairing. There is only one real problem with it though, going from the Season 8 comics perspective. Satsu was the one to wake her up when Amy's spell put her into the enchanted sleep. The spelled sleep where only one who really, actually loves (in a romantic sense) her could kiss her awake from. Your "revelation" with Satsu on the phone though causes the story to become much less than it should have been. Pity.
Comments from author:
I don't have a copy of the challenge anymore but the phone call was part of the challenge this was written for. It was a center point of the challenge, but yeah, I probably should have given her a few more lines to show she was being dumb 'cause she was in love. That was my intent.
Review By [Roth
] • Date [16 Jun 11] • Not Rated