Great job so far. There are far too few Inuyasha crosses that are worth the time to read and it's nice to see a focus on someone other than Inuyasha or Kagome for a change.
It's also very nice to see a new twist on Buffy's unfortunate costume choice, rather than just another attempt to find a new way to stuff her somewhere safe and ignore her.
I look forward to seeing where you take this. (And given how Inutaisho has already slept with what I count to be three people, I get the impression your intent is to add at least one hanyou to the mix in good ol' Sunnyhell if a timeskip or a really long fic becomes a reasonable option.)
To much stuff going on and it's making me not care.
Multiple characters entering into a world that is already pretty much full makes them all extra baggage that will just splinter the story into small pieces each getting in the way of the main story.
Seems unlikely at this point but having Xander much changed decide to make it his ambition to become Lord of the West of the American Super Natural would of been interesting.
Honestly I'd be happy if you can keep a single plot from falling apart at this point.
Review By [Darksnider] • Date [18 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Great start and and great story, one request no Dawn or Joyce pairing okay, there´s just something not right to me with those two pairing ideas, any way your the author and i´ll accept whatever you do, peace out.
Review By [Kaosreign] • Date [18 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
It's rare to see an anime crossover that's well-written and planned. Going in, I know it was an InuYasha fic, but couldn't figure out who Xander was going as. Excellent spelling, grammar, and punctuation. I problem at all putting this on my tracking list. The only problem I will have, in fact, is waiting for the next chapter! Hope to see more soon.
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Review By [SisterD] • Date [18 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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