Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mmooch
Got a kick out of the line, "...we should put him to sleep" and the resulting action by Max. These two shouldn't be allowed anywhere near a child! Funny as h*ll, though.
Review By [mmooch
] • Date [20 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JacobPhoenix
keep up the good work
Review By [JacobPhoenix
] • Date [20 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]