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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Grovtech
Review:
Still catching up and I really enjoyed this background. I well understand having too many ideas and not enough time to write them all down.
Grover
Review By [Grovtech] • Date [8 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Zeviz
Review:
It would be interesting to see this story continued.
Comments from author:
Like with so many of my stories I've got ideas about it but little liem. I've got some of Gibbs wooing attempts sketched out.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Zeviz] • Date [2 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DieselDriver
Review:
This could bear a sequel but I understand you have a LOT of projects underway.
Comments from author:
I might write some more, but it will be part of the main story, I think. Too many ideas...


Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [17 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from starwolf
Review:
an outstanding introduction for for Gibbs and Tara to your AU universe. the only problem I saw was the navy has no Second Lieutenants. his rank should have been Lieutenant Junior Grade (LTJG). great story, thanks
Comments from author:
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. Ah. That's what you get from moving from Marine to Navy to Marine a couple of times... (As in during the writing)

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [starwolf] • Date [5 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Nice little story, you really got Gribbs off to a tee, loved the sheriff too.

D.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I rather liked writing those two together.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Aahhh, more backstory! So, this is where Eileen Beckforth came from. Interesting.
Comments from author:
Yup, and so we mix and match moie and more... Thanks for reviewing
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Meneldur
Review:
Oh, beautiful. I always loved Tara, and even here, in an abusive household, she manages to be relatively well-educated, brave enough to go to the police despite the danger, and virtuous enough to care about her mother above herself. And it was good to see that Eileen made some sort of penance, even it it didn't go as well as she had hoped. Gibbs was excellent as always. I can't wait to see where this will lead Eileen and Tara.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Tara was homeschooled and does have her mother''s full support, that helps. But I've always liked the character of Tara.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [15 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)ayg
Review:
Eileen may or may not be a good teacher for Joyce, but the big question is if she will be trusted enough for that.

What did Tara's mother actually die of in the canon verse? Illness? Or being so badly treated by her husband that she died from that? I assume her talk of maybe dying soon has to do with being worried about execution for her past crimes. Hopefully, things will have calmed down a bit over the years and the revelations about the old body-hopper may change people's minds, too.
Comments from author:
Ah...but Eileen has a mother...

According to the Buffy wiki (and my memory) she died of soemthing unspecified (and farily horrible) to do with magic. And she does indeed expect to be exectued...but hopes tha Tara will be spared.

Body-hopper...I may need to use that term.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [(Current Donor)ayg] • Date [23 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from etienneofthewestwind
Review:
Interesting tie-in. The Maclays and the commune was even more extreme than what I got from the series, but an interesting take. I take it that Gibbs will remain involved in the former Maclay women's life? Or at least Tara's, as you've hinted that the illness that took her mother has made an appearance, though maybe she'll beat it... And Tara has got to be around Kelly's age, give or take a few years, which would make him protective.

I wonder what the rest of the Beckforth's think about Eileen and Tara's appearance, given her role in Black's last attempted uprising. And is there any connection to the HP Black family?
Comments from author:
I needed a setting in which witchcraft would be beleived in yet not accepted. Hence the rather frightening (I hope) sect.

Gibbs...well he does need Mothering.

There will be a talking heads chapter in Lonely Souls in which a lot of background is explained. And it will be up fairly soon so I'm not revealing much when I say yes, the HP Black famliy has yet another black sheep...
Review By [etienneofthewestwind] • Date [23 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cordyfan
Review:
A very nice NCIS-Buffy tie-in - don't think I've ever read a story where we see Tara's original home.
Comments from author:
I probably answered this already but the nifty new unanswered reviews filter showed it, so...

Thank you, I wanted to show Tara's background and I hoped it was believable. I wondered what sort of community would let a girl be raised like that and well...

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [22 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
Love the connections to the other story. Nicely done. However I could see Tara's mom helping Joyce with her powers assuming she is a mother witch. I am guessing Tara is as well. Great snippet. I look forward to seeing how you connect everyone.
Fire
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. As to how this will be woven in...you'll have to show patience... I'd like to say it won;t take long, but I fear that would be a fib.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [22 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PATM
Review:
Shannon's maiden name would be the same? I tried a quick search on imdb and wiki but couldn't pick the name out of the info there. Still, I am intrigued and beg you to continue this story line when you get the chance. Is there a converging storyline here? All the characters were incredibly life true. I must read more. EDIT 06/21/11. I'm going to read chapter 26 of L.S. again. Homework.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Ummm. Shannon's maiden name is Fielding...but she's definately dead...and not Eileen. There will be more of these characters, don't worry.
Review By [PATM] • Date [21 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great crossover, I could almost hear the banjo's.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Whiang! Or whatever onomatopeic one needs to represent a banjo. Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [20 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Blackett
Review:
You seem decided to introduce more and more of my favorite character in your world. Loved it.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I found it rather difficult to write Gibbs without his usual team (except for Ducky) but none of them were there yet...Glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [20 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from war
Review:
So that's what happened to Beckforth.

Good story looking forward to more of your work.
Comments from author:
Indeed. Some people may be disappointed...
Review By [war] • Date [20 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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