You know you can add chapters instead of creating new stories...right? It's in the instructions with the little button at the top that says "My Profile".
Other than that really weird thingie, it looks really good and I can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
Yeah I found out after I had uploaded it...DOH!
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [21 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Looks good, don't know much about recent Who canon, so don't know why timelord parts are hunted.
Comments from author:
Hi thanks for the review.It's something they slipped in at the beginning of the current season.Apparently 'they' will devastate whole worlds just to get a piece.
Review By [Rob] • Date [21 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Have to say if you don't keep going I may have to hunt you down. Great story and you so pegged the girls about Xander and how they see him. I always thought that was the idea on him in the show.
Comments from author:
Many thanks for the promt review.I have to say I had help writing the last part :)