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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from DieselDriver
Review:
Pretty obvious why someone would turn the world's slayers gay. They are afraid they will breed true and have lots of little baby slayers. BAD BAD BAD!!!
Comments from author:
This is something I thought of, but I decided to leave it a mystery...you never know I might need the plot line again some day!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [24 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from DieselDriver
Review:
Excellent!
Comments from author:
Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [24 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from DieselDriver
Review:
"“HI-HO SILVER, AWAAAY!” cried Kennedy as the horse thundered off across the field with its passengers bouncing wildly along on its back."

Ok, Kennedy made the famous call so that makes her the lone ranger. I guess that means Buffy is Tonto. (Almost typed "Toto", well I did, but that's the wrong video so I fixed it.)
Comments from author:
Half right, but you probably won't get what was actually going through my mind, it's about something over here called 'The Pony Club'.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from DieselDriver
Review:
It must boggle Kennedy's mind to think that someone who didn't think ahead like Buffy, could possibly have survived to become the world's oldest slayer.
Comments from author:
Buffy had friends...it made all the difference.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from DieselDriver
Review:
Well, I finally know what spotted dick is. Looked it up on wikipedia. Also checked one of their possible ideas for the reason it's called "spotted DICK". I thought of all sorts of weird jokes and puns because in the US "dick" is slang for "penis". Like "UH OH! I have a spotted dick. I'd better get to a specialist immediately". But I decided not to mention them... Right.

So maybe the spotted part is because it's spotted and dick as a German word. They don't speculate on why a German word would be used in a British food dish name.

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Thick (English)
Dicke (German)
Comments from author:
Yes 'dick' has the same meaning over here and probably the same jokes.

I once had some Irish friends who didn't know what 'spotted dick' or 'Toad in the Hole' was and Pasties left them totally confused! So you're not alone.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DieselDriver
Review:
Yep, the Russians are blunt and when they see something needs done they don't take half measures do they? KABOOM! No more Midwich Cuckoos in Russia.
Comments from author:
Y'know, some days I miss the old Soviet Union, in those days you knew exactly where you stood.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from maxthehobbit
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Hmm Buffy going gay, never figured Kennedy, always thought it would be Willow. The thought of Willow being kinky with the being tied/chained and spanked are things I've thought of for a long time. I've even thought of Buffy being kinky with Faith.
This whole lesbian thing could really get going in the next few stories, or it could be a one time thing.
Kennedy using ak's and rocket launchers was a good touch. At least the guy blowing himself up gave him eternal peace and hopefully killed all the aliens.

Maybe I'm thinking Willow is kinky because of those band camp type movies.

Another great story, Thanks.
Comments from author:
Yes the aliens...

As there is going to be a season two of Grim up North at least one of the aliens coming back might be in the offing.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [19 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from BrownFinderth
Review:
Very interesting, there at the end!! Why, indeed?
Comments from author:
I think I was having a slight dig at all the 'suddenly gay' fics out there.

Of course I had to then think of a way to un-gay everyone!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [10 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from iroshi
Review:
I just came across this series today, and it looked fairly well written from the first chapter I read, so I downloaded the whole thing to put on my tablet for reading over the weekend. I did notice something, though - the series listing includes:

14. Demon Alcohol; Songfic (Autumn 04). Buffy and Kennedy. (POSTED).

But the actual story doesn't show up on the listing. I only ask because it says it's been posted. I put the reference to it in my saved file, but I'd like to have a story in there. :)

I'll give you an actual review later this weekend after I've read enough to say more than, "It looks like you can write well enough that your grammar and syntax doesn't make me cringe." ^_^ (Which is pretty high praise in the first place, though, since I'm such a Grammar b*tch! ;)

I'll let you know in a few days whether I like your stories as much as your ability to string a few sentences together intelligibly, eh? ^_^
Comments from author:
'Demon Alcohol' was posted as part of the story prior to 'Another Brick in the Wall' the title of which escapes me at the moment.

As DA was a songfic and no one reads song fics I thought I'd be sneaky and post it as part of another story. Only yesterday I was thinking I should make a note of this in the Story Listing. There's another mistake there too; there's a reference to a story called 'Heros and Vilians', this story was actually posted as 'California Girls' something else I need to change.

The last story 'Doing Time' will start being posted next week.

Thanks for the interest,
Dave.
Review By [iroshi] • Date [5 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from Ltlconf
Review:
Howdy Dave!

"...born to kill!" Heh, what a line. Also a very true as when ya get right down to it, that's what Slayers do, and boy does Kenn do it well!
And all the Slayer's gay? Well, it's many a fanfic writer's dream and certainly solves their datin' issues (gotta be hard ta find a guy with no inadequacy issues: think Riley) and kinda stupid to wipe out the line as the whole FAMILY would carry any gene. If it's not a gene thing, then it really don't matter no way as the assinine PTB would control the succession.
Anyway ya slice things though its got ta be a deeper game than it looks.

Oh, and I think the profs sacrifice was noble as it made sure none got out. Of course we gotta worry 'bout the Others and further alien threats. As there was the Initiative I gotta figure there's a group (or groups) ta deal with alien threats as well.
Meh, what's alien and what's supernatural is kinda a matter of semantics. Other planet, other dimension, it's really all the same in the end.
I think the Council just got a whole other page added to their portfolio!


The Cracker.
Comments from author:
Yes, this episode was a little about cutting through the emphamisms that they wrap slaying up in to make them feel good about it. But then most of them are teenage girls so perhaps its acceptable.

The gay thing, just my evil sense of humour at work there...MAW-HA-HA!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Ltlconf] • Date [19 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from EasterCat
Review:
I really enjoyed the story. The way you've humanized Kennedy, unlike a number of authors on TTH, is entertaining and interesting.
I look forward to reading more installments.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

Kennedy's main handicap in the series was that she wasn't Tara. I think a lot of people take out their 'hurt' at losing Tara on Kennedy and of course she never got a chance at any character developement in the series.

Only a couple of stories left to go in the Grim Up North series of stories, however I am working on Season two.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [EasterCat] • Date [16 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Great ending to another gripping story. For some strange reason, as a heterosexual male, I am intrigued the latest crisis. Once again, parts of your story made me laugh a lot. But when the Cuckoos made the two little girls kill themselves, you nearly made me sick. I'm glad you killed off all the little bastards, and they were bastards in both the technical and sociological senses.

But once again you killed off a character I liked when the prof blew himself up to take out the remaining Cuckoos. Did I mention the two girls being forced to kill themselves really freaked me out? Well it did.

I can't wait to read your next story and learn more about the Gay Slayer Plague. Lol!
Comments from author:
The Gay Slayer Plague? Is that a Scottish tune I wonder.

The girls had to be killed to forestall any comments there might have been against Kennedy gunning down teenagers. Also I really had to show just how 'alien' these Children were.

Prof Z died in the book and the film I just changed the technology a little...at the end of it all he was perhaps the real hero of the story.

Did Prof Z really kill them all? What if a few of them escaped? Who are The Others? All these questions and more may or may not be answered soon...MAW-HA-HA!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from Mcspender
Review:
So the kids got a big boom as a farewell gift, nicee =D!!.
So the slayers are going gay?? Wonder how that works, the Hoff maybe??.
By the way, is David dead or he ran away like the coward he is??.
Cool fic dude, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
I thought I'd try for a little suspense and maybe have some of these plots lines come back a bite the slayers in the arse later!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from MarcusRowland
Review:
This is presumably the demon whats-his-name up to his old tricks again? Or the aliens are taking over the slayers??
Comments from author:
And now for something completely different, as they used to say on Blue Peter.

Maw-ha-ha!

Cheers Dave.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Hecatonchires
Review:
Getting intense. I'm reading Kennedy's lines in a slightly tongue in cheeck manner tho :)
Comments from author:
Thank-you. Tongue in cheek? That's about right!

Dave.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Not Rated
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