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Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from (Recent Donor)AnotherJD
I get the feeling you may be confused about the difference between speech tags and beats. It is possible to smile, grin, nod, or glare during an utterance, but it is not possible to smile, grin, nod, or glare the words themselves.

And in this one chapter your characters nod ten times! Do you really want that much nodding?
Comments from author:
Really? Well, maybe you're right. I'll try to keep this in mind during my future stories.
Review By [(Recent Donor)AnotherJD] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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