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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from spartan
Review:
*Sigh*

This story is apparently abandoned. Which is a shame as it had all the hallmarkings of an epic in the making. Why did you abandon this story so close to actually starting it? It would have been better if you hadn't written anything, that way I wouldn't have gotten my hopes up. Shame....
Review By [spartan] • Date [6 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from misterwhy
Review:
I like your writing style; clear and descriptive with that touch of connectivity that separates the newbies from the better writers. Keep adding to this story. I like what I have seen so far.
Review By [misterwhy] • Date [22 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from spartan
Review:
Very good start to this story. This is the Wesley I always loved. And to see him in the Wizarding world would be something truly awesome. But you haven't updated since August. Is this story abandoned already? Or will you be updating sometime soon? Please let us know one way or the other. This story has too much potential to just let it die with a whimper.

Best Regards

Jon
Review By [spartan] • Date [25 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Meraculas
Review:
Okay, you've got my attention. This has the potential to be freaking awesome! Bad ass Wesley, Harry a year pre-Hogwarts, all ingredients in an amazing recipe. Wonder what all Wes might find about James, if he finds anything. It'll be interesting to know if Dumbledore and the ministry are going to try and keep the truth (and therefore everything about magic) secret from Wes. Oh, will Wes even let Harry go to Hogwarts? This has so much potential, update soon. Please!
Review By [Meraculas] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Alkeni
Review:
I eagerly await more. This is a cool idea.
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [23 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Past Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
the last lines had me laughing out loud.

great update
Review By [(Past Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from cflat
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Great to see another chapter! It'll be interesting to see Wesley's reaction when/if Harry does some accidental magic. Looking forward to the first meeting.
Review By [cflat] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from ChaosLady
Review:
Wonderful. I wonder when he's going to figure out that both of Harry's socialization and academic problems are because of his bullying cousin? Can't wait til the next update!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good chapter. Looking forward to where you may take this next!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Could you clarify a few things:

Before Jasmine?
Has Wesley actually brought Angel back up yet, or is he still working on finding him?

Thanks... not an expert on the time line... and people who use magic can have magic-influenced dreams.

Think the scenario is good for Wesley.
Comments from author:
Rough timeline:

This is after:
Wesley getting throat cut/smothered by pillow
Losing Connor and being told to never return to the Hotel
Angel locked in box under the ocean
Wes sleeping with Lilah/Justine in closet
Recovering Angel from the Ocean
Giving Angel all the info he found on Cordelia's disappearance

It's Pre:
Cordelia's return
The Beast blocking out the Sun
Jasmine's birth

Hope this helps.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AllenPitt
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Nearly a year before the Hogwarts letter? Fun. He can use his detective skills to find out more, or at least realize that there's something strange going on. I wonder if the Council knows about the wizarding world? So this is Wesley after getting his throat cut? Maybe after retrieving Angel from bottom of the ocean, then not rejoining the team? Badass Wesley would be perfect as a guardian for HP.
He may not be able to use a wand, but he can be very dangerous when he wants to be.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from thegoodfight
Review:
Really looking forward to the next chapter of this and, honestly, the rest of the story. The idea of a disgruntled and rough around the edges Wesley taking care of Harry leads to so many possabilities. Since there seems to be a full year before Hogwarts, there will be some changes I imagine. Also the bit about Wesley trying to find James Potters friends could always bump the time table up a bit. Either way, good job.
Review By [thegoodfight] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from karmasfriend
Review:
Awesome story! You do a great job with smoothly transitioning from one place to the other! Hope you write more soon!
Review By [karmasfriend] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
This should so screw with dumbles plans. I look forward to seeing more soon.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from MarcusSLazarus
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So... this is Harry pre-Hogwarts, huh?

I wonder how long it will take Wesley to realise what Harry's capable of...
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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