Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Choices" from bradsan
it's a good story. I only ask don't rush things. You go so fast can you slow down a bit and go further in detail. You write good only a little bit in a hurry. Please I don't mean it negative it's positive review.
Oh and so you'll know I've got this one on tracking so I can see when you update
Review By [bradsan
] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Choices" from efwrocks
I definitely think you should continue. This story is really good so far.
Review By [efwrocks
] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from scottm
Don't end it there. THey have to get back together after Buffy makes Edward pay sufficiently, she needs to make him more sorry first.
Comments from author:
Ohh I won't lol Edward WILL pay dearly for angering Buffy.
Review By [scottm
] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]