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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from AbscondingCascade
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Fantastic, YABSBH (Yet another brilliant story by hotpoint). In thanks have this link to some LOTR music I found while browsing youtube - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4QfHKv86gRQ
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Angelform
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Well he’s a lunatic for sure. Rather fun and effective one thought.

When Shannon learns English and starts talking back I will worry.
Review By [Angelform] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KalaongX
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How will Shephard handle repeatedly running into witnesses of HECU murdering scientists? After all, there are so many running around Combine-occupied Earth that I "wonder if there's anyone in this dystopian future who didn't used to work at that bloody place."

Sounds like you need an HECU survivor to spout the party line: "Those asshole scientists started this whole mess with their 'Resonance Cascade'. And it was Freeman's idea. General Kilgore say so. KIL AL SYNTISTS"

If Shephard's smart, he'll realize that his friends were duped into becoming stormtroopers. If not, then at some point The One Free Man and The Shepard will have to settle who's the bigger badass - and who's the guy who kills striders on foot?
Review By [KalaongX] • Date [8 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Gideon
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Don't ya hate it when the good guys keep disarming you? Luckily Noriko has her head on straight and now Shep gets to kill some bad guys :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [4 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from superbrutal
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LOL I love how that guy just added in that they fought off hunters with a pipe wrenches.

That was perfect. :)

Great job
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [3 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Angelform
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Having your reputation precede you isn’t always a good thing. Still better than your aroma preceding you.

Wonder if the names were planed?
Freeman and Shephard.
Both great names for prophesies.
Comments from author:
Great names indeed!
Review By [Angelform] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from superbrutal
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I love this story, well written and I can tell you put a lot of great detail into the story.

I love the personality you've given Shepard too, I'm looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it :-)
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Gideon
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I just hope all the new people Shepard has just met don't die in the next 5 minutes!
Comments from author:
So does he ;-)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [30 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from AllenPitt
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I'm sure he & Freeman will hit it off from the start. With that 'not a crowbar'. But at least he's got freaky looking aliens vouching for him.
And boy, does the Marine Corps owe him a lot of back pay or what?
Comments from author:
Of course they might argue he was AWOL for twenty years :-p
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [30 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Gideon
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So Adrian doesn't really like Gordon? What a surprise. I kinda hope they never meet, because that wouldn't be good for Earth no matter who won. Maybe after a few days of hearing everyone gush about Gordon he will know to hide his dislike really well :)
Comments from author:
"One Free Man my ass"

*grumble grumble*

:-p
Review By [Gideon] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AllenPitt
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what, he doesn't like the demigod Freeman? That won't make him popular with the Resistance. But a good shockroach should overcome all obstacles.
Comments from author:
Freeman killed an awful lot of HECU Marines. Shephard is holding a grudge!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Angelform
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I know nothing of Half-Life but your stuff is generally of a very high quality.
I will await updates with eagerness.
Comments from author:
Hope you like it then :-)
Review By [Angelform] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from onefreeman
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So I just got my daily email of TTH story updates - as soon as I saw this story title I perked up, and once I saw the author's name I got very excited indeed! Very interested to see where you're going with this :)

The only downside is that now I'll be waiting longer for more Compelled, Hunted Tribes and the rest! :p
Comments from author:
Not that much longer!
Review By [onefreeman] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)betascud
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Well cool, although I think it is a bit late to insert Shephard... In the middle of Episode 2? You will have to add a lot of content to make it longer than mere five chapters... Probably the surprise crossover is Portal (but it happened between HL and HL2, so hmmm). Or you're planning to expand it to the Borealis. Or whatever.

I'll read it, though I would prefer you continued one of your other stories (I'm tracking/recommending most of them :P)...
Comments from author:
Or whatever ;-)
Review By [(Past Donor)betascud] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
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