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Review of chapter "Beginnings" from Bronze
Review:
I am in AWE of so many different things, on so many different levels. Please, you have to write more! The connections between each person feel as though they have the strength to stand alone outside of the group connection without loosing any depth; the glimpses given are informative.

Thank you for sharing this. I look forward to seeing more.

Bronze
Review By [Bronze] • Date [12 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beginnings" from Genuka
Review:
A beginning. That's the perfect way to look at it and that's really what it is a truly new beginning for them all. More please!

As for the banners can't make ones for the ones that I'm not familiar with the fandom or it wont look right sense I'll have absolutely noooooo background to work with but I'll take a look at what you've written and see what I can come up with.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Scoobies" from shadowflame
Review:
This story is completely insane... from the little I've seen of Torchwood...Owen? With kids? That are Xan, Spike, and Angel? Brilliant. But.. it's a suitable insanity. If that makes sense. Future cussin'! Wouldn't have taken Liam for a browncoat...but eh, whatev. and how did John Hart get there...and what does he want....?
Review By [shadowflame] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Scoobies" from Genuka
Review:
Well that's a lovely twist! More please!

Also as a note you can go to:
http://www.goldcoastwebdesigns.com/12.shtml

To learn the syntax that this site accepts for posting an image or link within a story. There's just one catch with the images on this site - they have to already be posted elsewhere and linked as an image from there. Just a friendly warning.

Frankly I'd just give you the correct setup in this review but the site erases it so I gave you the next best thing. Bookmark the link, it has the coding syntax that you'll need to insert just about anything into one of your stories. Enjoy!

More please! And I'm glad you liked the Banner it took me a couple of hours to make. *huge grin*

As to my reading absence.... the site deleted you from my tracking list, again. I've been having some problems with that, so if I disappear for a while then come back the site likely did it, again. Very annoying.
Comments from author:
Thanks a bunch. I had no idea how to do that, so expect to see the banner in the actual chapter next time. And there will be more soon. I had a hectic weekend and had no time to write, so you'll have to wait a little.

Tally XD

P.S: Can you make me more banners? For my other stories? *turns puppy dog eyes on*
Review By [Genuka] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Scoobies" from kayron
Review:
'Gorram it'. Isn't that a Serenity universe curse expression? Or has young Liam become a scifi fan and watched the tv program or the movie? John Hart is the older lokking version of Will. What is he doing there? He is the Torchwood team's version of Ethan Rayne. Trouble.
Comments from author:
Liam's a sci-fi fan, because I don't think he could be living in the Hub and be Xan's brother without watching sci-fi. And as for John... I have plans for John. You'll see! *insert manical laugh*

Tally XD
Review By [kayron] • Date [21 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Scoobies" from DeeRose
Review:
Over all the story is amusing, but you really need to find a beta to pull it together a bit better. The main plot line is interesting, I like the idea that the kids have been de-aged and dropped into Cardiff. While the kids are funny we don't get to see enough of their reactions, the chapters seem forced - the main intention being to get some place else so they are not flushed out enough to do justice to the story. Once you've told us who a character is you don't need to keep referencing them by all their categories, it's better to just use their name.

You have some really good ideas here, it would be a shame if you weren't able to get them all across to the readers.
Review By [DeeRose] • Date [21 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three Years on, and we're all still here." from silvergaurd
Review:
hope to see more.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three Years on, and we're all still here." from Genuka
Review:
Oh, that's just evil.... Maybe I shouldn't have made a banner for such a naughty cliffhanger author? Better snatch it up quick before I change my mind and just in case you missed the first review with the link here it is again.

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/200/9/d/daddy_owen_harper_story_banner_by_genuka-d411ww6.jpg
Comments from author:
Sorry! I didn't get your first review until after I'd posted the second chapter! :(
I'll put it up next time ;)
Thalliope XD
Review By [Genuka] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three Baby Harpers" from Genuka
Review:
Your requested banner misoure! (Yeah, I know I spelled that wrong, now go look at your banner.)

URL:
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/200/9/d/daddy_owen_harper_story_banner_by_genuka-d411ww6.jpg
Comments from author:
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Thank you soooooooo much. You rock!
hehehehe. I got a banner! *does a little happy dance in the back of her classroom*
ThalliopeXD
Review By [Genuka] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Almost Ate the Principal!" from Caliadragon
Review:
You are completely awesome and so is this story. I really cannot wait to see what happens next. Is Xander's ability to draw homicidal women going to follow him into his new reality?

Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [3 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Almost Ate the Principal!" from kayron
Review:
I can't believe Owen made them go to school! I can't belive that Owen got them to GO to school!
Review By [kayron] • Date [2 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Almost Ate the Principal!" from Genuka
Review:
oh... that's just evil to do to them... *evil smirk* More please!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Almost Ate the Principal!" from WolfWriter
Review:
I must admit, I have issues with this chapter.

Xander has already been through Hell....uh, middle school and high school. And now he has to go back AGAIN???

What kind of reward is that from the Powers? It seems more like a punishment to me.

School is NOT a fun time of life. Bullying, from both teachers and other students, homework, tests, and having to live with condescending, cutting, snotty remarks from adults, who appoint themselves your guardian, just because they say so?

Does Owen have any legal right to these three? He takes them in and sends them to the most detrimental environment Lucifer ever thought of, and it's for their BENEFIT?

Uh...no.

If I know Xander, he will rebel by getting mediocre grades, being the clown and generally driving the teachers nuts. Or, he will scare the other students by channeling both the Hyena and the Soldier, hopefully the teachers as well.

If it was me, and I'm thankful that it's not, I'd be screaming bloody blue murder about the whole deal.

They aren't even citizens of that reality. Why are they subject to its laws?

I say let them test out of the school system, and let Owen be their guardian if he really has to.

Bet he's the kind of guy that says, "But you're not allowed to have these kinds of weapons, you're just children." Or something to that effect.

Of course, the boys can always run for it, and make for the States; or the North Pole; or call D'Hoffryn to grant a wish for them.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Almost Ate the Principal!" from DesitaniaF
Review:
i almost want to ask you to have Jon ONeill from Stargate fall through next... but nah. cool story
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Almost Ate the Principal!" from VillageOrchid
Review:
How does Gwen know about Spike and Angelus? Aren't they from a different dimension?
Comments from author:
In the last chapter, Xander, Spike and Angel told them all about what happened in their reality before Whistler arrived, but they didn't say that that was who they were.
Hope that straightens it out!
CleopatraKahlan XD
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Jun 11] • Not Rated
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