with the enhanced strength he could survive the mjolinor armor give him a set of that it kills normal humans who try to wear it but hes not normal now is he.
I would love to see xander get a little lovin' lol. Maybe he could fall in love with a draenai? Or have a little comedy and he faces off against a 'lock and their succubus and the succubus wants some lovin from him and not fightin. Like a play on his whole demon magnet thing.
I have to say I have enjoyed this story so far and I eagerly await more. I have read one other story following this basic idea and I have to say so far this one is far superior. The one I read skipped to many things and advanced the plot in a huge rush. Not to mention eventually Xander sort of got forgotten and the side characters took the story over.
I am very glad to see a limitation put upon the Chaos spell being used again, repeated use of it can easily ruin any story as it has far to much potential for abuse if the user knows what will happen in advance. As for what Xander should use the Chaos spell for, it better be something useful and durable. A lightsaber sounds like a good idea but if Xander lacked the memories of a jedi or the technology to ever repair it, it would not last to long with being used constantly.
While I don't think this should become some kind of smut fic I can't help but hope Xander gets to see a little action with a female or two durring his journey. The qualities that made him such a geek in Sunnydale would make Xander a real hero in the WoW universe. His 'white knight' complex backed up with his new magic powers would make him something worthy of respect for a change.
Comments from author:
Well, strictly spoken, Xander can use the Chaos spell repeatedly. I agree that using it too often, or on too large scale can bust a story, though. That's why i have limited the scale he could achieve, and i think i can tell that there will be strings attached to its use.
This is defiantly is going to be an interesting story. I like your idea about the light saber, and halo crossover. Thank you for letting us read your work, and I can't wait to read more of it.
Sincerely
John
Review By [Moontrap] • Date [30 Jun 11] • Not Rated
I have to admit, it's an interesting twist on the Exiled thing. A bit slow, but the story IS just beginning, eh? Hope you update again soon so I can start getting a real feel for it. If your other fics are any indication, though, it'll probably be really good.
Review By [Selias] • Date [30 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Well I like this story so far but I do think you should stay away from anything to high tech. But if you are foloowing the game then have xander learn some professions like blacksmithing and enchanting and with a little creative twist he could make and enchant a lightsaber like sword lol. See forget tech and do shit with magic since magic is the ruler of azeroth lol. I actually think xander would make a good hunter class.
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