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Xander and the quest for relics.

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Review of chapter "Chapter Five ~ Epilogue" from eriktheviking
Review:
A cracking good crossover especially the nod to Dorian Gray.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five ~ Epilogue" from Bill
Review:
Good one!
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bill] • Date [19 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five ~ Epilogue" from gaulty
Review:
good story, byes
Comments from author:
Thanks, I enjoyed writing it.
Review By [gaulty] • Date [22 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five ~ Epilogue" from JediKnight
Review:
This seemed very short.

-Edit: I think you mean "Days in the Life".
Comments from author:
True enough, a couple of days in the like so to speak.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five ~ Epilogue" from Muadzin
Review:
I don't get it. I get xander being around thanks to his Dorian Grey thingy, but I don't get how the other Scoobs keep on interacting with him across time. At first I didn't mind, expecting an explanation at some point, but now it seems to be over before it got even started. And I do feel like I'm missing critical parts of this story.

Edit: Okay, I've just read the challenge and some things start making a little more sense, but I still feel like only the surface has been scratched here.
Comments from author:
They aren't interacting with him through time. Willow is still alive, so is Cordelia (mostly), Dawn is stuck in her bottle. I probably could have went further with this story, but I liked having a short story come of it. Thanks for reading and sorry that it was a bit confusing.
Review By [Muadzin] • Date [14 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five ~ Epilogue" from draconis
Review:
Awwww, man! This story was fun and intriguing. Does it have to end there? (whine, snivel, stroke ego, beg)

As for being quarantined...it wasn't the naked green Dawn, was it?
Comments from author:
It probably didn't have to end there but it did. Though we'll see.

As for the quarantined it was a bad summary, that's now fixed.
Review By [draconis] • Date [13 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five ~ Epilogue" from Vilkath
Review:
A very interesting idea and not a bad story either. I do feel things seemed a bit rushed in the last chapter. It just seemed like everything had been set up and then the story ended. I hope this story continues on to spark a series because it seems like a shame to go through so much trouble setting Xander up in the Star Trek universe and then do nothing with it.

I do wonder why this story is under quaritine however. I can't remember seeing anything overly offensive in the story.
Comments from author:
I liked the set up. I might do something with it I might not. But it was a fun little story to write.

As for the issues with the stuff, I forgot to fix the working summary a while ago. Fixed that, should be good to go.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [13 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four ~" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Excellent!
Comments from author:
It's been a fun story to work on.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four ~" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
She Dorian Grayed him? Oh, mama. And, of course, he has no CLUE she's been seeing his damage all this time, since (as I recall) the recipient seeing the portrait breaks the spell and all that crap hits the fan at once.
Comments from author:
For centuries now. :) As for him having no clue, you're correct. As for breaking the spell if he looks at it, maybe maybe not. In the older versions of such stories the painting could be looked at without (physical) harm. It was just the destruction that caused problems. Though Willow would of course try to keep him from seeing it, for many reasons, including not wanting to be reminded of the pain he's went through because of her. (never mind the good times he's also had.)
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four ~" from Mordare
Review:
Ahh, nice way to have Xander still alive. Loving the story so far. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I thought it would be interesting to go a different direction for Xander's immortality than most of the stories I've seen.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four ~" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Loving the story so far. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four ~" from Darksnider
Review:
Reads horribly to me sorry calling a Klingon that creature that far along the time line just breaks the story.

Like Aliens are a surprise 300 years later after the fact.
Comments from author:
I never said they were a surprise. As for calling the alien a creature, thanks for mentioning that. I fixed where I called them a creature when I was talking about Julian. Wrong sort of description to use there. As for the other creature, I'll respectfully decline to alter that as it's how Sasha sees them, at least right now.
Review By [Darksnider] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four ~" from michaelangelo
Review:
Lol a Picture of Xander Harris :) never thought of that rout to immortality a la Dorian Grey. Very original and brilliant idea.
Comments from author:
I liked it. I figured it was a nice change from the he's immortal a la highlander... and the hey at least I'm not related to Mr. Harris stories I've seen. While I don't have too much against those, I wanted to try something a bit different. Glad you like it.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four ~" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting job on the chapter, not really a fan of DS9 though.

-Edit: Why don't you like Vulcans?
Comments from author:
I'm not exactly a fan of DS9 either, but I'm a fan of the doctor and Dax. I figured they had an interesting dynamic that I could toss into the story and have the time lines sort of work. It was either that or Gian (sp) (character that Woopie played in next gen) as I detest vulcans.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three ~ Heroes Die" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Excellent cliffy!
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [10 Jul 11] • Not Rated
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