LOL!! I had to go back and read the other chapters again but this is (_blank_)! (_blank)!! Fantastic! Everyone at work was looking stupid at me as I stood there and laughed for a few. Thank you so much. :-)
Review By [jhor] • Date [17 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
you really don't update nearly enough for as funny as you are. every time you update on every story I wind up almost breaking a rib laughing my ass off
When I first started reading this I thought I kew where it was headed, but I was so wrong. Its even better then I thought it would be. Please write more, I couldn't stop laughing the whole time.
Review By [cindlemain] • Date [16 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Okay, I only know a little bit about Deadpool, but I think you used him right. I thought it was funny that Angel was the one who pointed out how similar Xander and DP seemed in terms of personality. Good use of some regular exposition to keep things going for Xander's "quest" to come.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Apr 13] • Not Rated