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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from bradsan
great series. love the stories. Great writing and plot.

One thing though. Not having a soul doesn't mean they don't know right form wrong. Even without a soul they know the difference. They only don't care about it because a soul can go to heaven or hell. Soulless you can't go to heaven you always end up in hell, something similar or between. That's why soulless the creatures are different from the souled ones. A souled demon has a choice go good, bad or something in the middle the grey area. The choice makes where they end up.
So soulless ones just don't care the piece that could give them access to peace is gone and a demon is left. Spike is the best example he loved Dru but loved being evil, after the chip he slowly changed.

Sorry needed to say this.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review :) And I agree with you about the thing with the soul, I just changed it a bit for my purpose. Call it creative license :)
Review By [bradsan] • Date [25 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saiyajin revamped" from AntiCreator
Absolutely brilliant. Vegeta, the super saiyajin vampire. What a plot twist. I know I suspected that Vegeta was the Dark Prince, I mean, like I said, who else can it be, but a vampire still with the same strengths as a saiyajin, only stronger than he was before. Ever since I first got into DBZ, Vegeta was always my favourite character, and I always thought that what he said to Goku when possessed by Babidi made a lot of sense. Don't get me wrong, I still liked Vegeta when he was fnally good at the end of the Buu saga, but he was always interesting when he wasn't sure, like during the Android and Cell sagas, and more so when he was evil, like the Saiyan saga and Namek. Now, with no soul and this enormous power, after having seen what you've got so far, I'm sure it'll be very interesting reading the rest of this tale. The good thing is, this is set after GT, so anything can happen, and as we know, that's the whole point of fanfiction.

I also like how, regarding Buffy and Angel, although there have been some major changes in both their worlds, most noticeably Angel and Spike becoming human, you have somehow kept the stories very close to canon, and that is something you have done very well. My questions are now all seeming to be answered, and I'm looking forward to reading it to the very end.

P.S Sorry it took a while to review, but I've had a lot on with work over the last few weeks, but now things should hopefully calm down for a while, so I'll be able to read and review the next chapter quite quickly. Take care for now.
Review By [AntiCreator] • Date [7 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reunion" from AntiCreator
Okay, that's good. Two chapters in one go. Unfortunately, I would have rather had the remaining fourteen, but I guess that takes the fun out of it for you. I'm just glad you've got this story completed.

Many meetings I see, and most of them good. Thanks for the explanation about Connor, it certainly cleared up a lot of things. And it's good to see that they've all met up and the fun seems ready to truly begin. Just out of interest, does Mirai travel between the two timelines to visit his mother and see how things are, or has she travelled back to the 'past' with him? From what I could tell in 'The History of Trunks' it seems like she didn't have too much left in her time except for her son, so that would make sense. Two Trunks and two Bulmas. That would be interesting.

Anyway, back to the review, still lots of questions, but now thay've started to be answered that's good. Vegeta is away from the city for training, so my guess that Vegeta is the Dark Prince still stands. But how and why and all the other questions I've asked I look forward to finding out the answers.

By the way, thanks for your concern regarding the riots, but it seems to truly be over now, at least I hope, thanks to the police's response. If you don't already know, they're trying to arrest and charge every looter, and so far, it seems to be working, so I think it's a deterrent to all those who may of been thinking of starting up again.

Take care mate, and I look forward to the next chapter.
Review By [AntiCreator] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Blood and Portals - Part Two" from AntiCreator
Hi mate. Sorry I took a while to review this one, but as you know I'm from England, London in fact, and I work in a place called Ealing. Just a couple of nights ago, there was a massive riot, and so I just haven't had the time lately, but now, it's thankfully quiet (even though I don't think it'll last for more than a week or two), so I can review your story.

Still no questions really answered, but thankfully, not even more to answer. I like the whole idea of Dawn and Connor working together. They're about the same age, so could we possibly be seeing the beginnings of a great friendship or relationship? I guess that they ARE in the Z fighters world, as it is called Earth, and it seems to be familiar.

Buffy's little visit with the Oracles I found very interesting, and I'm very curious as to what this 'far greater power' is. You write well and have good ideas, so I'll definitely be reviewing the next chapter, where hopefully, I'll find out at least a little more. Take care.
Comments from author:
Damn! I completely forgot about your living in England... I had only heard about the riots shortly after I came back from the US and it's really terrible! Unfortunately I've been so busy that I had hardly any time to follow this, but I hope not many people were hurt, though I heard that several stores were robbed and burned down. And I really hope for you guys that everything will quiet down quickly and that there won't be any new riots.

Anyway, I will most likely post a new chapter again on Friday AND I've got other good news! This story is officially finished! I've written the epilogue last Monday! Yay me! So there'll be nineteen chapters in total, including the prologue and the epilogue. So, I just thought I'd give you a head's-up so that you'll know what to expect, at least chapter-wise.
However, while writing the story, I noticed that Connor's role grew progressively smaller, as other things became more important, but he'll still be there, doing what he can.

So, I don't wanna give you any more spoilers! Expect a new chapter on Friday, or better yet, two, because I've just noticed that the next chapter is a really short one. So I'll make it a double-update.

Take care and be careful, if there are any new riots!
Review By [AntiCreator] • Date [10 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Blood and Portals - Part One" from AntiCreator
Okay. Another cliffhanger. And yet even more questions. So, I'm assuming Principal Wood is still the same guy he was before. Where does the portal lead? Could it possibly be to the Earth where the Z fighters live? If so, then what's to stop all of them getting killed in a matter of seconds? One solar flare and they'd all be dust. I guess that Dawn being the key is why she was needed, but Connor going through as well should create some interesting dynamics. It'll be nice when I finally get some answers, I just hope I don't have to wait too long. Laters.
Review By [AntiCreator] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secrets" from AntiCreator
Okay. More questions, and no answers as of yet. Interesting. I'll assume that the teenager is Connor. It's been a while since I saw any Angel, so I'm not sure how this would fit in yet, as in, how much of the Darla and Holtz storyline still happened. Or did Angel and Cordelia have a kid, and something to do with Cordy being a demon caused him to grow up quick? What's up with Dawn? And the questions from the first chapter are still to be answered. Looking forward to the next chapter, and seeing how the Z-fighters fit into this. Don't keep me hanging too long please mate.
Review By [AntiCreator] • Date [25 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Message" from AntiCreator
Hi there. Good to see you're back. Already looking forward to the next chapter, and seeing just exactly what's going on. At a guess I'd say the Dark Prince must be Vegeta, I mean, who else can be the Dark Prince. But how, why and what, I'm looking forward to finding out. Again, I'll say to you, if you get any negative reviews, just ignore them. Anyone who can write this well in a language that ain't their first language, then you're doing great. Besides, the story is good enough that it just doesn't matter. Take care, and I'll be reviewing each chapter, just like your last story. Laters.
Review By [AntiCreator] • Date [17 Jul 11] • Not Rated
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