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Review of chapter "So *that's* Why Vampires Like Virgins..." from HananeELmokkadem
Review:
God I love this!!!!
I really enjoy reading your work, it's always very entertaining. I hope you update this soon because I can't wait to see what happens.
Hanane
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [16 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So *that's* Why Vampires Like Virgins..." from ClaireStarling
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I miss this story! I cannot wait until the next part... it's been too long.
Review By [ClaireStarling] • Date [25 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So *that's* Why Vampires Like Virgins..." from debbie
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I wonder if they can just have Faith and leave Buffy for Dawn. That is mean I know but I think killing Buffy might stop the relationship between Dawn and James. Curious about how Victoria will respond to all of this.
Review By [debbie] • Date [27 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hello, Hot Version of the Turok-Han!" from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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I have Dawn's perfect weapon against these newcomers - lure them out under the disco ball so that it's light shines upon them. The sparklepires will light up like glitter and then they will die of embarrassment as everyone laughs at them. :-)

Of course, if they turn her, she will become beautiful. Absolutely, totally beautiful - [repeat about 10 million times] - and then Bella can be jealous of her. :-)
Comments from author:
HAHAHAHAHAHA

I had to reply immediately because you made me laugh :) On both accounts - the disco ball and the lameness of Bella. ;)

Thanks for reading Janessa!
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So *that's* Why Vampires Like Virgins..." from Odin
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Great title for the chapter, I couldn't help but chuckle when I read it. I am curious as to where James rushed off to, and whether he is going to help Buffy with the First. I'm also curious about whether the Scythe will be effective against James' breed of vampires.

Looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for you work.
Comments from author:
That was something that I can't help but think when it comes to vampires having sex with teenagers - I mean, how *do* they maintain control and not bite them all crazy? ;) heehee.

As always, thank you for reading & reviewing Odin! Tis appreciated greatly :)
Review By [Odin] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So *that's* Why Vampires Like Virgins..." from LeaFairy
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*squee* New chapter already!! Loved it!!

Dawn's reaction to the blood was perfect I think, so was James' amusement over how aggravated she was becoming =) I have to admit the whole scene was pretty funny with her throwing pillows at the indestructible vampire :-) Poor Dawnie breaking her elbow though! Owwww!! Buffy's not going to be very pleased when she finds out! Also poor Dawn with the breaking of her illusions of the her vamp "boyfriend" - definitely got the truth about what/who he really is thrown at her again. Completely suck-y news about sleeping with a guy who admits to planning on killing your sister :( lol.

I did really love the part when the truth of her being the Slayer's sister came out - it was really well done and now I'm dying to know James' thoughts on finding out! I wonder what he thinks of Dawn now? I also loved this part --
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“Dawn, trust me when I say that I was not just nice to you to drink your blood. If I didn’t…like…you then you would be dead. And believe me when I say that I do not often find a human that I like.”
-- Coming from James, that's really fucking sweet! lol.

Anyway, this was an amazing chapter, like always!! Thanks so much for the update!!
Comments from author:
Thank you!!

Yes, I was giggling as I wrote the pillow scene. I mean, being stuck in a bedroom doesn't equate to many ideal weapons, especially when laying on a bed.

Thanks for your comments on the difference scenes. We'll get James' POV next ;)

and...hahaha yes coming from James that IS fucking sweet! heehee.

Thanks doll!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So *that's* Why Vampires Like Virgins..." from Dmitri
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I guess that rescuing girls from the other vampires does not necessarily mean that James can have his way with them all the way all the time. Oh well. And the canon is back in the character of Caleb and his merry band of Turok-Han. This is going to be bumpy for a long time yet, will it not?
Comments from author:
Bumpy for a long time? Hmmmm....yes and no. Certain events will be speeding up very soon, but there will be some big time bumpiness later down the road :)

Thanks for reading!
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So *that's* Why Vampires Like Virgins..." from yuiop
Review:
Nice!
Comments from author:
Thanks!! :)
Review By [yuiop] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So *that's* Why Vampires Like Virgins..." from AllenPitt
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The Scythe could probably kill a Twi-vamp, especially if one was standing there going all "that can't possibly hurt me.." . Beyond that it'd take a team of slayers with special equipment. Flame throwers, RPGs, that sort of thing.
Hm.... Dawn isn't thinking clearly. There are 2 slayers right now. She's used to thinking of Buffy as "the" Slayer. Her new boyfriend would probably think it a fine solution to kill Faith instead. Problem solved!
..... How did she "air quote" her words with one hand?
Comments from author:
If the Scythe can cut through Turok-Han like hot butter, then the Twilight vamps definitely better watch out ;)

And you're right about the Dawnster not thinking clearly - Poor Faith, everyone always forgets about her! ;)

lol...you can do air quote with one hand! Just, ya know, looks kinda funny... ;)

Thanks for reading!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pleasure & Pain" from Odin
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This is a great story. I wasn't sure at first about a relationship between James and Dawn, but I really like the way you are developing that relationship. I guess my preconceptions of James from "Twilight" were crossing over. I have my suspicions on who was lurking outside, and am awaiting the next update to see them confirmed. The sex scene was great, I hope there is more and that the relationship develops into love. I wonder what Dawn's special power would be if she were turned? So many possibilities. Thanks for your work.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading, Odin.

I have a love/hate feeling towards the Twilight series so I enjoy taking aspects of the story and turning it on it's head - exploring the depravity and human-drinkin' evil of the 'bad' vamps but also exploring their other sides. Adding Dawn to the mixture just makes it more fun :)

I appreciate the review :)
Review By [Odin] • Date [15 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pleasure & Pain" from LeaFairy
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Holy... Wow!!! *fans self* This was soooo freaking hot!!! Your James sure is something! ;-)

This was such a fantastic chapter! The smut was incredible, totally delicious really, and your Dawn and her inner thoughts were just awesome... like always! I loved her inner thoughts/freak-outs and the sometimes crazy (but always funny) things she thinks/says. I especially loved her rationalization of her losing her virginity will help her be safe from dark virgin rituals... I'm sure Buffy will definitely agree =)

Anyhoo, this was beyond excellent and I'm definitely curious to see what happens next! Thanks bunches for the update (and a FR-21 rated one at that)!!!
Comments from author:
haha thank you darling!

I'm glad the smut was delicious - sometimes I feel awkward writing smut, which is why this chapter took so long. The major thing about smut is I cannot get all 'romantic novel with fabio on the cover' kind of writing. I really wanted to showcase her random thoughts and wondering what's right or wrong or, hot damn! that feels good! heeehee

And yes, I always thought about that - horror films kill 'whores' but in the Jossverse (and spn) virgins die first. I mean, damn, if that was my world I would have shacked up asap! haha.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [13 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pleasure & Pain" from Aryll
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Woo, its getting a little hot in here ;) James is way too sexy in this story...
Comments from author:
heehee... ;)

I certainly enjoy my version of James!
Review By [Aryll] • Date [12 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pleasure & Pain" from Dmitri
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Oh, dear. Dawn's a big girl now for real. When Buffy and others find out about this, they'll find a way to kill James, (or at least maim him past recovery) his invincibility be damned. But I'm sure that it was worth it...
PS: I'm sorry, but Watermelon? Not the best of things to be said to your significant other, no matter how recent, if you want that relationship to floursh, in my opinion. That's just off.
Comments from author:
errrrrrrrrrr..*looks away in embarrassment* Well, she does smell like a watermelon to him...lol, but now it sounds stupid when you say it like that! lol. Then again, in my opinion (as a single gal) almost all endearments sound stupid.

But yes, IF Buffy & the gang do find out...then James is screwed...of course, he does have that super strength!

Thanks for reading!
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Intentions" from LeaFairy
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Uh oh!!! I wonder who's watching the lovebirds? With the red eyes, I'm guessing Victoria, which would be awesome and slightly troubling, or it could be Laurent, but with them being in Sunnydale, it really could be anything/anyone watching :)

I've got to say I loved the flirtage in this chapter (they flirt so well, and the kissing was hot as hell! Hey, I rhymed! lol.) and I'm really adoring James' nickname for Dawn - Watermelon. Aww, it's cute! I am curious as to why for Dawn James smells like candy/cotton candy though? It seems weird that a vampire, especially a vampire like James, would smell like that. Hmm... (Yes, I was re-reading the whole story again...lol) I also really LOVED James' answer to Dawn's "What do you want from me". Yay!! He doesn't want to just kill her anymore... I think? Heehee.

I love how attached Dawn is getting to James too (she's so crushing, hard), but still being understandably wary as well. Which I think she would be even if he was human, not as much obviously, but still... Summers women have had bad experience with all kinds of boyfriends whenever human, vampire or demon =)

Anyhoo, thanks for another killer update! This story really has become one of my new favorites and I'm always excited to read a new chapter!!

EDIT:: I forgot to say that I'm totally for the FR21!! It's completely up to you though.
Comments from author:
Hola darling! Thanks for reading :) And re-reading! hee :)

James smells like cotton candy/candy because all Twilight vampires smell sweet - it helps to bring in their prey (humans) by smelling good. To werewolves it smells sickly sweet and gross, but humans just want to lean in closer...close enough to bite you, my dear!

Yes, James' feelings on Dawn are an evolving thing...and I'm glad you liked the kissing! I'm enjoying writing their scenes ;)

And thanks for the FR21 input!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Intentions" from deathgeonous
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Hmm, and who's that watching from the bushes? Probably Victoria, but will she be mad? Nah, knowing her, she just might want to join in! Oh, and when I said you don't see many fics like this one, yes I was being complementary, but what I was specifically referring to was a positive look on James. Sure, I've seen a few pro Victoria fics out there, hell, I really love this one fic.. but that neither here nor there, what I have never seen is a pro James fic, ever. I'm sure that there must be one somewhere, but, your's is the first I've personally seen. Anyways, liking what I've seen of this so far, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Hmmm, we'll have to see what Victoria is like ;) I plan on showing a different side of her in this story - just like with James. I want to put a positive spin on our trip of vampires :)

I cannot believe there are no pro-James fics! Esp when he's so pretty and deliciously evil!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [11 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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