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Review of chapter "Kick Ass" from Eljin
Review:
i really like this story. it was easy to read and entertaining.
i hope you pick it back up again
Review By [Eljin] • Date [19 Aug 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "When Xander Woke Up" from Fablesrogue
Review:
I carry the motion that you continue this beautiful piece of story telling.

And the runaways tie in as well. Love that.
Review By [Fablesrogue] • Date [12 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "When Xander Woke Up" from LaraBr
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First off I'd like to say this is a seriously good piece of work. And I'd recommend it to anyone wanting to have a good laugh and not delve into a dark piece of fiction. I'd love to see this story continue on to become a monster in size. (That's how much I like this piece.)

Personally I'd love to see more of Xander and Cassie interacting together, From the way you have written them so far they do seem to have the most compatible personalities. Especially considering Xander is just your normal Joe who landed head first into fighting the supernatural.

Nice work on creating 'Bekah - A Very good character. (Almost considering swiping her to plague my rpg group :) )
Review By [LaraBr] • Date [16 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "When Xander Woke Up" from Balder
Review:
i second the plea to continue this story.
Review By [Balder] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Kick Ass" from CastorandPollux
Review:
Hey Joe. Please continue this.
Review By [CastorandPollux] • Date [5 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kick Ass" from TharzZzDunN
Review:
That was awesome, the last chapter was pure gold as well! Hope to see more in the series when you find time.

Cheers!
Review By [TharzZzDunN] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kick Ass" from TinMan
Review:
One of the things I really like about this story is that you took the time to explain how adding more people to a relationship adds more work and problems. Much more realistic then what I generally run into. I also like the fact that you didn't brush over the illegality of multiple wife marriages and brought out a realistic solution.

Each time (in any of your stories) you do a scene where the parental figures are watching their kids on TV, I can't help but laugh.


...I'm probably gonna rec this story of yours too, but I really need to start conserving them considering how low I'm probably running.
Comments from author:
Little known fact: you start with 10 recs and get one more for each month you're a member and leave at least one review. I have 110 recs because I've left reviews in most of the 109 months I've been a member; I've missed eleven months in nine years of being a member, mostly due to illness or school keeping me busy.
Review By [TinMan] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Goddess of the Dayspring, Am I (Part 3)" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
I don't remember if I asked this before or if it was already present, so.. Is the outline/sketch in "Tyrian" purple?

Because, like that tagline for review reply alerts says, it would be awesome if it were.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [25 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Kick Ass" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
This story was rib-shatteringly funny and kept up the bad quips the entire time! Read it or weep!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [15 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Introductions" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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I'm gonna have to go with number two. Number one is more beautiful and therefore eliminates herself. Cassie is always complaining that, while not a dog, she feels inadequate compared to her teammates.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [15 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kick Ass" from (Current Donor)Katrina
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Several parts were laugh out loud guffaw funny. Thank you. I needed those. I look forward to more whenever you get to them. *tracked,* of course. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Asmara" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
nice fic overall, the only thing that nearly made me stop reading was the idea of posting part
in this fic and part in another. I always hate that in comics and that's one of the reason I stopped reading
those.

Edit: Hmm smart?....ok matter of opinion...I'm not reading the other story and won't because frankly I just don't care for it and it nearly made me stop read this story as well. That may be just me, but I find that a huge turn off for another wise good to read fic.
Comments from author:
Well, I couldn't post the Kit-side stuff in this story for obvious reasons. And since a lot of people here were NOT reading the other story and then whining at me because they didn't get what was going on when the two crossed over, I came up with that idea as a way of forcing people to do the smart thing and read both stories.

EDIT: To each their own. Again, it is the SMART thing to do considering what I have planned for Kit among other characters, but if you'd rather not know what's going on when her and Dawn and other characters make extensive references to Scary Girls... well, I can't stop you. :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [9 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Kick Ass" from lastjuan
Review:
Thank you so much for this story. Although at the beginning it seemed a bit forced , it improves notably around the 7 or 8 chapter.

I hope that you find the time and energy to restart t working on it soon. BTW, as I my knowledge of the Marvel Universe is seriously outdated, I have to say that I had some troubles following the companion story Scary Girls need love too, but I suppose that it's inevitable.
Comments from author:
Well, the first few chapters are dictated for the most part by the nature of the challenge. If you think this is awkward or forced, see some of the other entries that respond to said same challenge.

As for knowledge, Runaways is a rather rare series to know. I just found them perfect to mash up Kit with for the side story, so I went with it. I'm finding people are having issues keeping up with her half to things, though, so Kit will probably leave the team behind soon to adventure elsewhere.
Review By [lastjuan] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "…Go Back to the Asylum" from warfolomei
Review:
Whuh ?! Not even sure how we ended up here. Apparently my English is lacking in some major departments and I just can't let you misunderstand me like this. So let's try again.

If I somehow managed to insinuate my need to make this an ''almighty Xander'' fic, I apologies. In reality I enjoy it the way it is. You let him be human (no hyena, fishDNA or other hocus pocuses) and kept him on the team, not to mention the enjoyment his current company brings. What I like the most in Xander is his personality, so my request was never about power or the use of uber-skills. Here I copy/paste some quotes from the show...

"I'm warning you, I've been highly trained to put this through your heart. No mercy, no warning."
"I think the whole sucking-the-life-out-of-people would have been a strain on the relationship."
"They say young people never learn anything in high school nowadays, but I've learned to be afraid."
"In other words...'This was no boating accident."
"It's Giles, Hey everyone its Giles....with a chainsaw?"
"Um could we go back to the haunted house? Cause this is freaking me out!"

*O'Toole: ''What are you, retarded?''
Xander: ''No. No, I had to take that test when I was seven. A little slow in some stuff, mostly math and spatial relations, but certainly not challenged or anything"*

*Xander: "Yeah, great knife. Although I think it may technically be a sword"
O'Toole: "She's called Katie"
Xander: "You gave it a girl's name. How very serial killer of you" *

This is what I was talking about, his own way of seeing and expressing things.
Review By [warfolomei] • Date [14 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome Home" from warfolomei
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-.- Oh for cry out ... Yes I know, it happened in ch.22...it was an example, that's why I didn't use words straight from it.
I don't want to sound like an idiot, but have you actually read your own work ?

¨He doesn't really need to tell the girls how to do their jobs, does he?¨
- *It was becoming increasingly clear that they'd run into something the girls weren't equipped to handle...*
As a 'Watcher' this would be a good time to act, but he keeps on making observations.

¨At this point, Kate and Cassie have been doing it for two years..¨
-*It's their actual hide that makes them hard to hurt, yeah? Not some like, weird mystical force field or something?*
So, she used that tactic against an unknown demon.. hoping it would work ? It would make so much more sense if Illyria answered that question.

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Apparently you made up your mind and nothing I say will make you change it. It's still a great story and I will keep on reading it...
Comments from author:
"As a 'Watcher' this would be a good time to act, but he keeps on making observations." Yes. He thinks before making a decision. Tragic, innit?

"So, she used that tactic against an unknown demon.. hoping it would work ? It would make so much more sense if Illyria answered that question."
Again, it's SOP for a Pym-ite and also, when is Illyria ever straightforward or helpful? O_o

EDIT: Reading your other reviews and challenges and such, I get it. You're a Xander fanboy. That's cool. But "let's do Xander Almighty!" isn't really where my mind goes when I do a story involving him. Like, ever. If that's what you're looking for, there are hundreds if not thousands of stories in that vein on this site. Some of them are even Marvel.
Review By [warfolomei] • Date [12 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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