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Review of chapter "Eternal Truth" from Harry
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While I will be sorry to see Hellfire go, I have enjoyed it. And to see Yami getting into the spirit of love (Albeit in a weird way Via the Addams Family) is good. Maybe Dartz can bring some love and happiness to Buffy.
Comments from author:
I hope so as well. And I'm glad that seeing Yami getting into the spirit of love thanks to the Addams Family is quite nice too.

Plus, thanks for the nice feedback as well. It means a lot to me. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rodeo" from Harry
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Well, Yami showed those two vamps WHY you do not mess with the King of Games! They tried to take him on and got blown away by the DARK MAGICAN! As for Hitler and Mussolini, if they had listened to the Pharaoh, much of history would have been changed.
Comments from author:
I agree with you there on both counts, of course. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rodeo" from Harry
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When Yami challenges you to a duel, you either A) Better have your own deck ready to go *Ultimate Ancient Gear Golem: ULTIMATE MECHANIZED MAYHEM!* or B) Be prepared to hit the road and fast! As for Yami Yugi and Andrew, that was nice to see. Talking about history and what the Pharaoh would have done if he had been there for those times. That is something you rarely see, either in the Anime or the Magna.
Comments from author:
I agree. Plus, Adolf Hitler, Joseph Stalin and Benito Mussolini would've been in big trouble if they attempted to mess with Yami back then, too.
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Do It Like a Dude" from Harry
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A sweet story. And to get Buffy to admit what she was like before she was called is something we rarelky get to see. And Yami, well, he is in many ways, a member of the family., As Joyce once siad, he WAS a big brother to Dawn and a very good freind to Buffy. And to get a compliment like that from the Scooby Gangs den mother is something that few people can say that they have gotten.
Comments from author:
I cannot agree more there, of course. And thanks for the nice feedback. It means a lot to me. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [22 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Draggin’ the Line" from Harry
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Well, Yami surprised me as well as so many others! When he said he was going to go into the "Oldest Proffession" I thought that he would be in trouble! But NO! He took out those that had the most money, put them into a coma and left them to be found. And with the money that he got, Buffy and Dawn are not going to have to worry about loosing the house anytime soon.
Comments from author:
I agree with you right there, my friend. :) Yami definitely showed those pimps that he was not a rent-boy who owed them money, or somebody to be pushed around, either, but a very powerful Pharaoh that doesn't take kindly to those kinds of people that treat prostitutes and gigolos as though they're objects and not people, too. And you're right about another thing - it looks like Buffy and Dawn won't have to worry about losing the house they have right now, either.

Thanks for the nice feedback, too. That means a lot to me. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Faith and the Devil" from Harry
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*And the Thunder Rolls, and the LIGHTNING STRIKES! And the Thunder Rolls, and the Thunder Rolls* Faith, meet Yami Bakura. Yami Bakura sir, Ms. Faith Lehane. Two powerful people that if they start getting together, are going to make the undead population of Sunnydale DROP BIG TIME! When those two start working together, as the song puts it, The Thunder rolls and the Lightning stirkes! And that is what happens with these two. They ARE like Thunder and Lightning! Anyone who wants to mess with them should either have their head examined, or be prepared to either be pounded hard, or worse, get challenged to a SHADOW DUEL! *And the Thunder Rolls, and the Thunder Rolls*
Comments from author:
I cannot agree more. Faith and Yami Bakura make such a nice, as well as passionate couple right there... :)

Thanks for the nice feedback as well. I appreciate it. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "All Star" from Harry
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I think that Atem is going to be good for Andrew. He is a big brother/Mentor to him, like he is a big brother to Dawn. But harm his freinds, and you WILL find out the hard way what happens to those that due! Even Seto is not going to interfere when it comes to Atem going after someone who has harmed a member of the Scooby Gang. In other words, its time for a Shadow Game. And the looser does NOT want to see what the price is for that!
Comments from author:
I fully cannot agree more with you there. Thanks for the nice feedback, too. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [24 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hard Workin’ Man" from Harry
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Sometimes Andrew, you let your love of figures and Science Fiction get in the way of what needs to be done. Back off, gets some fresh air and sun once in a while. Its good for you, and I know that Atem would say the same to you as well.
Comments from author:
I agree. Thanks for the nice feedback, too. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [24 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell Fire" from Harry
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Seto, if you want the Slayer to be your mate, you are going about it all wrong! Woo her. Gently seduce her. Going at it this way is only going to get you in TROUBLE!
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell Fire" from Harry
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EASY SETO! You may want the slayer, but you need to go about it a different way! Woo her, make her feel welcome, THEN make your move! Going like this is going to get you broken, or, if you are a vamp, STAKED!
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Father Figure" from Harry
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GREAT choice of a song for this chapter! And while Giles (or as Xander calls him, the G-Man) may be the Father for Buffy, Yami IS the big brother she has always needed. And if ANYONE tries to get into this family, they are going to have their hands full! *Takes out deck and shuffles it* Just one friendly message to those who would try: ITS TIME TO DUEL!
Comments from author:
I agree. :) Thanks.
Review By [Harry] • Date [15 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Father Figure" from Harry
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Yami got one of the HIGHEST compliments from Buffy that you could ask for! To be called a Big Brother who she could talk to is something that few people could ask for. And, in many ways, Glies WAS the true Father Figure for Buffy. Now, if only Yami could have met Jenny Calender. I think those two would have been VERY close friends!
Comments from author:
I cannot agree more there. :) And you're right -- Buffy seeing Yami as a Big Brother figure is a really neat thing.

Thanks for the nice review as well. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Puppy Love" from Harry
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EASY JOEY! Dawn has a sister who is VERY protective of her!!!! You casue her any pain, you WILL be in trouble!!!!
Comments from author:
I can understand that.
Review By [Harry] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Yami Vs Larry" from Harry
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Larry, take some friendly advice: LISTEN TO WHAT PRINCE ATEM HAS TO SAY! Its better to be honest than to risk shame in doing something that is not in your nature!
Comments from author:
I cannot agree more, of course. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell Fire" from Harry
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Easy Seto! I know you find Buffy interesting, but getting your way with her is going to take some time. Woo her. Romance her. THEN you can seduce her!
Comments from author:
Glad you like it so far. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [13 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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