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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Moontrap
Review:
I just finished reading the three chapters you have posted so far, and I like them very much. Giving Xander the powers of Black Adam was a nice touch. Thank you for letting us read your work and I can't wait to read more of it.

Sincerely

John

PS I hate to point out an error, but how could Xander help save Indiana and still refer to the movie when talking to his new bosses in this chapter?
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story. ;-)

And I screwed up with that reference. ;-(

It will be corrected, ASAP.
Review By [Moontrap] • Date [28 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from LordCorwin
Review:
excellent. i always liked shazam. billy batson. what not
Comments from author:
Yeah, he's a fun character with a much more Scooby-oriented origin story than Superman or most of the other heroes.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [26 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from frankocsic
Review:
Great update! Looking forward to more. Good job.
Comments from author:
Thanks. More will appear at my muse's command.
Review By [frankocsic] • Date [26 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from raxadian
Review:
Uh? Captain Marvel? I guess he must have upgraded the uniform since then...
Comments from author:
Actually, it's Captain Marvel's antithesis, Black Adam. Same powers and similar origin, but completely different motivation.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [26 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from raxadian
Review:
That's the problem with starting from the future and then doing a flashback, since we know Xander is gonna get that amulet.
Comments from author:
True, but as I indicated, I'm emulating the comic book style writing and that was a staple way of introducing new plot lines for a long while.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [26 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from raxadian
Review:
Super suits? Personally I prefer Xander fighting smart, like him having Glory tracked and then killed while she was in her weak male form.
Comments from author:
Remember the problems which Spike had in Season Five with trying to get anyone to understand that Ben was concealing Glory?

Part of Glory's protective enchantment was that no living being could comprehend or understand that she was hiding inside Ben.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [26 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from BlueEyedBrigadier
Review:
So...Xander's now Captain Marvel/Black Adam, eh? Well, that will definitely be a boon to the Scoobies and the necessary tasks do seem to be primarily related to things yet to come (getting Connor back to Angel and stopping Jasmine's plans for conquest through love; saving Dawn from Glory; getting Faith and Buffy reconciled to rejoin the Slayer line) but a couple I'm a bit fuzzy on unless they're Fang Gang-related stuff I've forgotten about...

Still, I loved how Xander went all "seen too many power abusers to accept any offers to upgrade without some background info" with the SHAZAM gods :d
Comments from author:
Yes, Xander is now the Scooby equivalent of Black Adam.

And the other tasks are not Scooby or Fang Gang related. That's where the other crosses will be appearing.
Review By [BlueEyedBrigadier] • Date [26 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)redjacobson
Review:
Xander as Black Adam? This could be interesting! I recognized a couple of the tasks that Xander has, but my sleep deprived brain is drawing a blank on the others, so I'll just have to see where you go with this.

Red
Comments from author:
The first task Xander needs to perform is figure out exactly what it is he needs to do. ;-)

After that, it's just a matter of finding whoever he needs to talk to, and discussing things rationally with them.

Because that's something that the Scoobies have always excelled at doing, right? ;-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)redjacobson] • Date [26 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Cateagle
Review:
*snort* How absolute Marvel-ous an amulet. This is clearly going to be a fun ride for all involved. The rescue of Dawn sounds like it's one of those tasks and I'm looking forward to seeing how the others work out.
Comments from author:
All of the tasks are gonna require a lot of effort by everyone involved, and it's not gonna be a walk in the park for any of them.

More as my muse commands.
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [26 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from hamishog
Review:
I can't identify most of the tasks but that's probably where the multiple crossings come in although I did recognize the retrieval of Conner and Jasmine's defeat as well as saving Dawn from Glory. At least one of those sounds like it is from Stargate but I could be wrong - most probably am. Still, a tale worth hearing the telling of. And what a wonderful way to get upgraded --- SHAZAM! Although his uniform is more Black Adam than Captain Marvel. Still and all, you got to give props to a man who basically told a pantheon 'my way or the die way'. I, too, would like to see more of this.
Comments from author:
Only a couple of the tasks involved the Scoobies or the Fang Gang, the rest will be crossing over to other series.

And the origin is actually a minor variation on Black Adam's origin. ;-)
Review By [hamishog] • Date [25 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good work
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [25 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from RoyalTwinFangs
Review:
Seems nice.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I appreciate your reviewing and letting me know you liked it.
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [25 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Robby
Review:
SHAZAM......

You get a 10 out of 10 for that alone.XD

Really looking forward to seeing what happens next!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks. More will appear as my muse dictates it to me. ;-)
Review By [Robby] • Date [25 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from rdmcmains
Review:
Given that most of my exposure to Buffy is through fanfiction, I only recognized the last three of Xander's tasks.

4. Stop Jasmine from being reborn.
5. Get Faith and Buffy together and rejoin the Slayer line.
6. Save Dawn from Glory.

If you wouldn't mind dropping me a line to explain the first three, I'd appreciate it.

Great story though!
Comments from author:
All I can say right now is that Xander's figuring out what the various tasks require and the people involved are part of the upcoming story/

Glad you enjoyed it. ;-)
Review By [rdmcmains] • Date [25 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from twlight
Review:
Indiana Jones? Oh boy that man just has to bring trouble where ever he goes huh. I love this wonderful wonderful story so far and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this when ever the muse for this story bites you again. :-D
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story.

Hoping to get back to this one soon, but I'm making no promises.
Review By [twlight] • Date [30 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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