something terry goodkind wrote in his sword of truth series came to mind when thinking of faith defending against vamps after this massacre. "Im gonna do the worst thing imaginable, Im gonna let you live with the consequences of your actions."
Damnit, you made me leak manly tears. Excellent writing; I'm not sure where you plan on taking this, but you've got the makings of what could be a full-fledged series of stories once you finish 'Survivors.'
Comments from author:
Thank you...wow lol it's always kind of cool for me when i make someone cry
Review By [WildMartin] • Date [25 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
The Enterprise discovers another cold storage ship from the early 2000s. Either Faith or Giles are on the manifest. He/She is thawed out and tries to adapt to life on board the ship. While doing research, he/she discovers that one of the officers(Piccard or Riker) is descended from a member of the illustrious group that destroyed the Watcher's Council. History has been very kind to this group; not so to the Watcher's Council. He/She decides to set Piccard/Riker straight on just what kind of person his ancestor really was.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [24 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
yep, the idiots who did this likely don't realize the consequences--- it's open season now for vamps & demons, no active slayers. The last one left just doesn't care, at least for now. Might be funny if 'they' figure this out and have to come crawling to her for help. In fact if some group does contact her, no matter who they claim to be, they're likely the ones that did this. Hope she realizes it. Kinda surprised Giles hasn't tried calling up a vengeance demon to see if he can 'wish' the slayers back somehow...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Those final paragraphs - what can I say? Terribly sad. Let's hope their enemies go down hard; enemies who are inhumane and also enemies of the best of humanity.
Comments from author:
next chapter is posted...not as of now they wont' anyway lol, thanks for reading
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [16 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Good beginning, definitely interested in seeing where you take this story. One problem I see is that you might want to change it from being such a long lived airborne pathogen. Mainly because it would mean the pathogen would continue to spread it wouldn't just stay at he headquarters, meaning it would have killed off 99.9% of the population of the planet, not just the slayers and watchers. Or another suggestion is make it so that it only affects supernaturals and make it so that Xander and Andrew died in the first bomb attack, then it wouldn't matter if it was airborne or long lived it would only effect supernaturals so the normal humans wouldn't have a problem, at least until it mutated. But definitely a good start, I'm interested in seeing where you go with this story.
Comments from author:
Lol it was made up by me on the spot, I'm not too concerned about accuracy...it was the kind that stays within closed quarters we'll say lol. and it killed doctors and others who came inside too, remember?
thanks...i just posted next chapter
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Not Rated