Review of chapter "Just the fingers of your hand?" from RebeccaAshling
Susan is very um... mistressful. I'm guessing once a Queen of Narnia, always a Queen of Narnia. Does Anne have an unrevealed daughter? If this daughter is now forty-six then she'd have been born round about the time Susan met Anne. It's an odd thing, but I'd always imagined George as turning very girly later in life and Anne becoming the butch lesbian. Nice to have my assumptions be wrong in this case. Enjoyed the Buffy/Willow. I'm a Wiffy 'shipper :) Anyways, a good little story.
Comments from author:
Oh yes, Susan has her moments. But not often. Anne does have an unrevealed daughters. I am the master of unrevealed daughters. ;-) She was born several months before Anne met Susan. More Wiffy in the new chapter.
Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [RebeccaAshling
] • Date [3 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just the fingers of your hand?" from Meneldur
Beautiful. I loved seeing Susan as authoritative and regal as she was as Queen of Narnia, even if it was for behavior that did not suit a royal at all. In fact, that made it so much better.
The juxtaposition of the relationships was also done skillfully, though I would remove it from the note, so people would come to the conclusion by their own. It is interesting to note that while Willow and Buffy's relationship is the young one, the fact that Susan and Annie are in an older and more stable (some would say stolid) relationship makes Annie more hesitant when Susan confronts her with her desires.
Are you planning to continue with this series? Because I quite enjoy it. If you are, may I add a suggestion? Perhaps a hurt/comfort scene? I can very easily see one after Buffy or Willow are necessitated to punish the other, and between Susan and Annie on the background of an old friend dying.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Susan being regal in her relationship was amusing to me.
Anne is not so much stolid as reserved, she's not one for public displays of affection and to have sex outside the bedroom...well, really!
The series will most certainly be continued, I've uploaded the first part of the sequel just now. Actually there will be a hurt comfort scene pretty soon.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Review By [Meneldur
] • Date [16 Jul 11] • Not Rated